Kim Merryman Poet Blitz

Road To Now

down under
down a country road
road to success
road to nowhere
nowhere to hide
nowhere to run
run away from home
run a race
race horses
race to win
win the lottery
win a trip
trip to Australia
trip of a lifetime
lifetime warranty
lifetime of dreams
dreams have meanings
dreams come true
true or false
true love
love one another
love is blind
blind as a bat
blind date
date with destiny
date of birth
birth of a baby
birth of a vision
vision of loveliness
vision for the future
future of our children
future plans
plans for adventure
plans for people
people pleasers
people who care
care about others
care for the sick
sick in the head
sick and tired
tired of running
tired of trouble
trouble sleeping
trouble may come
come and see
come right now
now or never
now is the time
never
time

8/11/15
For Debbie Guzzi's "Down Under" contest

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Sara Kendrick September 12, 2015 at 8:55 AM Awesome work !! No wonder it is in the winners’ list. Congrats..Sara Kim Merryman September 14, 2015 at 5:09 PM Thank you, Sara!

Paul Callus September 9, 2015 at 4:30 PM A smooth flowing blitz, Kim! Congratulations on your fine win:) // paul Kim Merryman September 14, 2015 at 5:08 PM Thank you, Paul!

Julia Ward September 9, 2015 at 12:46 AM Congratulations on your win, Kim... I enjoyed the flow. Kim Merryman September 14, 2015 at 5:07 PM Thank you, Julia!

Skat A September 8, 2015 at 8:55 AM Kim, Congratulations on your -Down Under- win. Love .....SKAT** Kim Merryman September 14, 2015 at 5:07 PM Thank you, SKAT!

Eve Roper September 7, 2015 at 6:27 PM Fabulous write, Kim, back to congratulate you on your win a 7! Hugs Eve Kim Merryman September 14, 2015 at 5:06 PM Thank you, Eve!

Joseph May September 7, 2015 at 3:06 PM Congrats on a fine win Kim Kim Merryman September 14, 2015 at 5:06 PM Thank you, Joseph!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma September 6, 2015 at 11:27 PM How sweet n smoothly flowing Kim! Congrats on big win! Kim Merryman September 14, 2015 at 5:05 PM Thank you, Upma!

Debbie Guzzi September 6, 2015 at 8:55 PM So nice to see you among the big winners! I MISS you! Congrad's Light & Love Kim Merryman September 14, 2015 at 5:04 PM Thank you for my placement in your contest, Debbie!

Faye Gibson August 16, 2015 at 7:10 PM I enjoyed this blitz, Kim. This is a new form for me, but you handled it like a pro. Thanks for your visit to "My Library." Kim Merryman August 19, 2015 at 9:23 PM Thank you, Faye! Glad you enjoyed it!

Mary Rotman August 13, 2015 at 8:53 PM This is great. Kim Merryman August 19, 2015 at 9:22 PM Thank you, Mary!

Lindsay Laurie August 12, 2015 at 9:01 PM This is a great write Kim... your poem forced me to read quick as if I never had the time, and that's how your poem ended - thank you Kim - Lindsay Kim Merryman August 19, 2015 at 9:22 PM Thanks, Lindsay! I think they are supposed to be read quickly to make any sense? Glad you liked it.

Debbie Guzzi August 12, 2015 at 8:56 PM You DID it! whoopie! Light & Love Kim Merryman August 19, 2015 at 9:20 PM Thanks Debbie!

Nette Onclaud August 12, 2015 at 11:21 AM how is this floats from beginning to end is awesome,kim... you make it look so easy!.. al the best.. huggs Kim Merryman August 19, 2015 at 9:20 PM Nette, thank you for your encouraging words!

Brian Strand August 12, 2015 at 1:10 AM very original Kim,thanks for your always welcome comments on my endeavours.Rgds Brian Kim Merryman August 19, 2015 at 9:19 PM Thank you for stopping by, Brian!

Eve Roper August 11, 2015 at 10:52 PM Wonderful word use, Kim, a 7 hugs Eve and good luck in the contest Kim Merryman August 19, 2015 at 9:18 PM Thank you, Eve! I appreciate your visit.