Road To Alaska

The road is not the best
it is close to not at all.
Just when you think
you've had enough of this
washboard, potholed
ribbon of hell.

The fire weeds that edge
the roadway
capture your curiosity
with rich abundance
of dancing colors.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Jordan Avatar
August 27, 2008 at 3:07 PM
Tony what a interesting poem - enjoyed the read - God Bless
Richards Avatar
August 26, 2008 at 12:01 PM
Hello Tony...Thank you for your suggestion on my poem! I followed your advice, and changed it! :) It does flow better! .....I look forward to more and more of yours!! Hope you are enjoying your first week on Poetry Soup!!...Carrie
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August 25, 2008 at 4:40 PM
This is a creative poem with a surprise ending. Much said in a few words. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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August 25, 2008 at 4:19 PM
Our neighbors took that trip this summer with a huge RV! They said it was beautiful....however, said next time they are FLYING!!....Carrie
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