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R.M.+p.S. 4-Ever

Carvings in a tree,
A heart with an I love you;
Lover’s initials.

lovesenryu

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Tyler Martin

March 23, 2009 at 11:26 PM

You bring everything to poetrysoup. Nice job. Tyler

Danielle Moreno

March 16, 2009 at 7:33 PM

THAT WAS A GREAT POEM AND A PRETTY POEM RAUL...........................DANIELLE

Jay Loveless

March 7, 2009 at 4:18 AM

-smiles- nice job. I cant wait to see the second half of those initials for me today xD. Very cute.

Arany P.

March 5, 2009 at 6:51 AM

short forms... get you very expressive... good one! and thank you... ~ Arany

Robin L. Gass

March 4, 2009 at 9:18 PM

Perfectly beautiful and very clever Seryu, Raul! Love the title! Love, Robin

Elizabeth Neal

March 4, 2009 at 7:35 PM

Very craetive to express such a heartfelt pieace. love E.

Daniel Neal

March 4, 2009 at 2:29 PM

Nice work describing old times. DN

March 4, 2009 at 8:43 AM

Oh, I'm sure a lot of people can relate to this one. Thanks for allowing me to smile with your words. Young love--gotta' love it. Have a good day. Karen

Carrie Richards

March 4, 2009 at 7:08 AM

Oh so sweet.....Love this!! ~ :) Carrie

Sharon Winter

March 4, 2009 at 6:03 AM

Aha! So, you are a true romantic indeed. Clever and excellent Senryu! Love, Shar

Brian Strand

March 4, 2009 at 12:28 AM

Nice work Raul.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

March 3, 2009 at 7:02 PM

Dear Raul, Very deep Love Expressed I hope it was a young tree so it speaks for many generations Excellent Write Thank-YOU for your concern over my recent illness and YOUR gracious comments LOVE YOUr POETRY...HG

Laurie Ginn

March 3, 2009 at 6:59 PM

Whoa,,,back in da day lol sweet memories Raul.

Sandra Hudson

March 3, 2009 at 6:04 PM

Right back attcha...I like this one alot. This took a lot of thought. I never had anyone write my intials in a tree. gee....now I've missed something. lol-Always Alexandra

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