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In the heart of poverty

A wealth of talent resides.

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Carol Sunshine Brown

May 18, 2010 at 11:52 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Broken Monoku" contest Raul. May you have many more contest wins. Love, Carol

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

May 12, 2010 at 3:35 AM

You have that one right! Excellent writing! Congratulations on placing in Brian’s Broken Monoku contest with this wonderful line. It's easy to see why you did so well. Your creativity shines. Smiles, DAS-J

Andrew Crisci

May 7, 2010 at 11:06 PM

It's so true, Raul....wealthy people don't struggle for excellence, because they have everything. Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand's contest Broken Monoku. May you have many more. Love and admiration, Andrew.

Andrea Dietrich

May 5, 2010 at 3:23 PM

that is such a positive way of seeing things. Congratulations , Raul! Luv,andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

May 5, 2010 at 2:11 PM

Just had to say... Jimi Hendrix.. my kind of musician... thankxxx for the music contest Raul.. u know I am in already.. music and poetry go hand in hand .. I write lyrics too so "its all good" .. thankxxx ... lu.. Linda-Marie

May 5, 2010 at 8:15 AM

Thus is the life of a writer. So much captured in just two lines. Like the contrast used to carry the message. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Brian's contest. Enjoy your honor. Wishing you many more. Karen

Joyce Johnson

May 5, 2010 at 8:09 AM

Colngratulations Raul. Love, Joyce

Gert W. Knop

May 5, 2010 at 6:58 AM

Congrats, Raúl on your win! Lovely Monoku this one! Keep your creative pen flowing and thank you for your comments...Chao, Gert

Doris Culverhouse

May 5, 2010 at 6:31 AM

very inspirational poem

Dr.Ram Mehta

May 5, 2010 at 6:04 AM

Congrats on the win

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

May 5, 2010 at 5:03 AM

Congrats Raul on your HM in Brian's contest.. this write is spectacular in its meaning .. a wonderful honor for a wonderful write... with luv from the "Sweetheart"

Robert A. Dufresne

May 5, 2010 at 5:02 AM

Ain't that the truth! Congratulations Raul -Robert

Charmaine Chircop

May 5, 2010 at 12:57 AM

The best one I've read till now Raul,If I was judging.I place it first. .and re what Ruben said,though i dnt participate,i love your contests . .popular indeed,Charma.