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In the heart of poverty A wealth of talent resides.

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/18/2010 11:52:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Broken Monoku" contest Raul. May you have many more contest wins. Love, Carol

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 5/12/2010 3:35:00 AM

You have that one right! Excellent writing! Congratulations on placing in Brian’s Broken Monoku contest with this wonderful line. It's easy to see why you did so well. Your creativity shines. Smiles, DAS-J

Andrew Crisci

Date: 5/7/2010 11:06:00 PM

It's so true, Raul....wealthy people don't struggle for excellence, because they have everything. Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand's contest Broken Monoku. May you have many more. Love and admiration, Andrew.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/5/2010 3:23:00 PM

that is such a positive way of seeing things. Congratulations , Raul! Luv,andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/5/2010 2:11:00 PM

Just had to say... Jimi Hendrix.. my kind of musician... thankxxx for the music contest Raul.. u know I am in already.. music and poetry go hand in hand .. I write lyrics too so "its all good" .. thankxxx ... lu.. Linda-Marie

Date: 5/5/2010 8:15:00 AM

Thus is the life of a writer. So much captured in just two lines. Like the contrast used to carry the message. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Brian's contest. Enjoy your honor. Wishing you many more. Karen

Joyce Johnson

Date: 5/5/2010 8:09:00 AM

Colngratulations Raul. Love, Joyce

Gert W. Knop

Date: 5/5/2010 6:58:00 AM

Congrats, Raúl on your win! Lovely Monoku this one! Keep your creative pen flowing and thank you for your comments...Chao, Gert

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 5/5/2010 6:31:00 AM

very inspirational poem

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/5/2010 6:04:00 AM

Congrats on the win

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/5/2010 5:03:00 AM

Congrats Raul on your HM in Brian's contest.. this write is spectacular in its meaning .. a wonderful honor for a wonderful write... with luv from the "Sweetheart"

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 5/5/2010 5:02:00 AM

Ain't that the truth! Congratulations Raul -Robert

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/5/2010 12:57:00 AM

The best one I've read till now Raul,If I was judging.I place it first. .and re what Ruben said,though i dnt participate,i love your contests . .popular indeed,Charma.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/4/2010 6:41:00 PM

Good luck in the contest

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/4/2010 5:56:00 PM

It does indeed!!! We must not overlook!