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2/12/2017 RIZE Air molecules bursting at the seams with hydrogen A crafty fish could just about fly…draining a lil’ bit H2o through its gills…flitting from one molecule to another, while delightfully enjoying its very first aerial-panoramic perspective! Caldron of Sun, heavy trudging through the almost misty air Pushing, pushing, pushing…slowly forcing the horizon more and more south over the Atlantic Coast…Steaming moisture from the air whilst creating a larger and larger horizon of a grey and pink glow Other forces of nature…shall not overcome the fiery center of our Universe... no, not this day! As more and more of the sea’s horizon is unveiled…a marbling of pink and at least three shades of grey Oh, alas! A blank page is as to a new day, Yay! Another chance as the East, Atlantic sky widens faster and faster, forcing upward with increasing momentum, as the blue-white hot plasma forever-thirsty, drinks from the Milky Way Galaxy's precious molecules in its' atmosphere Once again, I am but a grateful blessed witness Jill Spagnola

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Date: 2/16/2017 12:40:00 AM
I love the scientific detail mixed with a poetic angle in this intriguing poem, Jill! Great write :)
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Jill Spagnola
Date: 2/22/2017 6:40:00 AM
thank you so much Laura:)....jill
Date: 2/12/2017 12:06:00 PM
Your precious molecules: words, have managed to paint a marvelous canvas of poetic images that encompasses the whole universe dearest, Jill! Welcome back! a seven!
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Jill Spagnola
Date: 2/15/2017 11:52:00 PM
Thank you so, my very wise friend...people like yourself are one of the main reasons I always come back in due time,,bless you with happiness and deep thoughts of gratitude...peace, jill
Date: 2/12/2017 11:00:00 AM
- An interesting poems, wonderful described Jill - Nice to see you back on the "soup" :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Jill Spagnola
Date: 2/13/2017 5:00:00 AM
Thank for the warm welcome back and as always...the encouragement you Always lend to me and others on this forum...I'm so glad to be able to hang and share here again..as I read and recall all the True talent we have...and :)...peace, Jill
Date: 2/12/2017 8:21:00 AM
All the majesty and power in your wonderful write! We usually see from our eyes but you have captured the awesome strength of the universe! I will save this one! 7
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Jill Spagnola
Date: 2/13/2017 5:03:00 AM
Ahhhhhh! You are so sweeeet, I can tell :)...Thank you soo much for encouragement....peace, Jill
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/12/2017 9:15:00 PM
Keep writing!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/12/2017 9:15:00 PM
Keep writing!
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Jill Spagnola
Date: 2/12/2017 9:05:00 AM
Thank you so much for your Awesome & gracious comments :).. It's been over four months since I have written or posted a poem...sometimes life doesn't allow things I love (really!)...I am so happy to have sometime to play on the sweet forum.....peace, Jill

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