Gershon Wolf Poet Rhyme

Rivulets Refreshed

Look out o'er the water
   thoughts ebb and flow
Stroll down the boardwalk
   miles and miles to go

Reflect and refresh to
   water's eddies and time 
Seeking new rivulets
   of rhythm and rhyme

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Sneha Rv February 8, 2019 at 3:57 AM This is peaceful and inspiring :)) Gershon Wolf February 8, 2019 at 9:00 AM Thank you so much, Sneha. I just love your refreshing comments: Short, sweet, and uplifting! :) gw

Michelle Faulkner February 7, 2019 at 2:02 PM This flows, like the river to the sea, has such a nice melodic feel! Gershon Wolf February 8, 2019 at 8:59 AM Thank you so much for noticing, Michelle. I was trying to achieve some kind of breezy, melodic effect in this poem. Best wishes, Gershon

Caren Krutsinger February 7, 2019 at 4:25 AM This has enough alliteration to make it fun to speak aloud. I am thinking it could be sung also. If you were a singer. I am not. Gershon Wolf February 8, 2019 at 8:58 AM Actually, I am a bit of a singer...So, thanks for a good idea, Caren! :) gw