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Rivulets Refreshed

Look out o'er the water thoughts ebb and flow Stroll down the boardwalk miles and miles to go Reflect and refresh to water's eddies and time Seeking new rivulets of rhythm and rhyme

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 2/8/2019 3:57:00 AM
This is peaceful and inspiring :))
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/8/2019 9:00:00 AM
Thank you so much, Sneha. I just love your refreshing comments: Short, sweet, and uplifting! :) gw
Date: 2/7/2019 2:02:00 PM
This flows, like the river to the sea, has such a nice melodic feel!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/8/2019 8:59:00 AM
Thank you so much for noticing, Michelle. I was trying to achieve some kind of breezy, melodic effect in this poem. Best wishes, Gershon
Date: 2/7/2019 4:25:00 AM
This has enough alliteration to make it fun to speak aloud. I am thinking it could be sung also. If you were a singer. I am not.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/8/2019 8:58:00 AM
Actually, I am a bit of a singer...So, thanks for a good idea, Caren! :) gw

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