River's Trail

Behold the grace of a river’s trail Trail of a pilgrimage, unknown Unknown to moontide swept by sand, Sand whirling unto endless curves. Contest Two -Four Lines Only
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Maverick Avatar
June 14, 2015 at 3:05 PM
Congratulations on the winner Franco..'
A  Avatar
June 12, 2015 at 7:39 PM
Franco, Congratulations on your 4 line win. Hugs SKAT
Merryman Avatar
June 12, 2015 at 5:52 PM
Excellent imagery! Congrats on your wonderful win, Franco! Love, Kim
Allison Avatar
June 12, 2015 at 3:09 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Franco:-) hugs Jan xx
Allison Avatar
June 8, 2015 at 4:43 AM
this is beautiful Franco - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan soupmail xx
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