river's ancient king hiku
For Sir Brian Strand's 1397 Poetry Contest
18 July 2025
green scales on water
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___ / o\~~~/o \___
/ \__/ ^ \__/ \
| (oo) (oo) | watching and waiting for prey,
\__ \__/~~~\__/ _/
` ----.___.-.___.--'~
bite of primal might
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Copyright © Bernard F. Asuncion | Year Posted 2025
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