Rivers

Rivers are like veins
They believe in us because they are us
All liquid runs towards freedom
The following-through of life after life
And whether it be brook, or stream, or faucet, or pouring bucket
The act of life is a spectacle for reverence
And with IPODs we are leagues away
Though with eyes
The liquid of our hearts
Connected via the veins of our bodies
We make way for re-blissing unions:

The achievement of flooding light
The rivers upon rivers
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Culverhouse Avatar
January 11, 2010 at 6:31 PM
enjoyed re4ading today
Devonshire Avatar
January 11, 2010 at 8:41 AM
Very interesting perspective on "rivers," Matt. I especially like the line about "The following-through of life after life." This is a good description of the never-ending cycle of rivers as well as human lives. Well done! Love, Carolyn
Strand Avatar
January 11, 2010 at 8:10 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Matt>rgds Brian
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January 11, 2010 at 6:12 AM
Wow, Matt. This is very spiritual. I love the analogy between rivers and veins>>..."life after life" Excellent write. And once again, thought provoking. Love to you. Dane Ann
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