Rivers

Meandering blues
Zig zagging natures terrain
Oozing beauty amor



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Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Bourner Avatar
August 28, 2009 at 10:23 AM
you can imagine, all of the rivers with this. a very nice work! good job!----Ell
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August 14, 2009 at 5:51 PM
Creative use of imagery for an interesting view. I really like the second line. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your kind comments. Have a wonderful weekend. Karen
Primble Avatar
August 14, 2009 at 9:43 AM
Amour, isn't it ? Maybe not, maybe you are French. I like French men, they are so romantic like this poem is
Austin Avatar
August 14, 2009 at 5:36 AM
Hi, James...Carolyn is fine. I've been getting mail from her regularly. she's in process of moving, and so very busy. Like you meandering blues.
Babcock Avatar
August 13, 2009 at 7:35 PM
I can see that river in my mind. Excellent Haiku. God Bless Phyl
Kendrick Avatar
August 13, 2009 at 2:22 PM
Nicely written. I can see the blue river and natures terrain with the silver armour. Keep writing. Sara
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