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Meandering blues Zig zagging natures terrain Oozing beauty amor

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Date: 8/28/2009 10:23:00 AM
you can imagine, all of the rivers with this. a very nice work! good job!----Ell
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Date: 8/14/2009 9:43:00 AM
Amour, isn't it ? Maybe not, maybe you are French. I like French men, they are so romantic like this poem is
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Date: 8/14/2009 5:36:00 AM
Hi, James...Carolyn is fine. I've been getting mail from her regularly. she's in process of moving, and so very busy. Like you meandering blues.
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Date: 8/13/2009 7:35:00 PM
I can see that river in my mind. Excellent Haiku. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 8/13/2009 2:22:00 PM
Nicely written. I can see the blue river and natures terrain with the silver armour. Keep writing. Sara
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