Rivers

Meandering blues Zig zagging natures terrain Oozing beauty amor http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/nature2.php

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Eleanore Bourner

Date: 8/28/2009 10:23:00 AM

you can imagine, all of the rivers with this. a very nice work! good job!----Ell

Date: 8/14/2009 5:51:00 PM

Creative use of imagery for an interesting view. I really like the second line. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your kind comments. Have a wonderful weekend. Karen

Euphiginia Primble

Date: 8/14/2009 9:43:00 AM

Amour, isn't it ? Maybe not, maybe you are French. I like French men, they are so romantic like this poem is

Daver Austin

Date: 8/14/2009 5:36:00 AM

Hi, James...Carolyn is fine. I've been getting mail from her regularly. she's in process of moving, and so very busy. Like you meandering blues.

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 8/13/2009 7:35:00 PM

I can see that river in my mind. Excellent Haiku. God Bless Phyl

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/13/2009 2:22:00 PM

Nicely written. I can see the blue river and natures terrain with the silver armour. Keep writing. Sara