River Walk

no one dares 
falling, along the river 
stepping stones 


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Poet Destroyer A

March 26, 2016 at 10:18 PM

Belly Bell, nice to see this one again. LINDA

Skat A

May 26, 2015 at 5:29 PM

enjoyed a second time

Anne-Lise Andresen

September 7, 2014 at 5:07 AM

- Hey Belly - Congratulations on winning poem in the contest: "River Walk" - Well done, I like it :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

September 6, 2014 at 10:47 PM

'congrat to you, Belly.

Brenda Meier-Hans

September 6, 2014 at 10:17 AM

Congratulations Belly.

Faye Gibson

September 6, 2014 at 9:25 AM

Congrats on your win!

Pandita Sietesantos

September 6, 2014 at 8:03 AM

Congratulations on your fine win! Well deserved with this great senryu! Pandita

Jan Allison

September 6, 2014 at 6:57 AM

so glad you changed the ending:-) many congrats Hugs jan xx

Dr.Ram Mehta

September 6, 2014 at 5:07 AM

A great thought nicely crafted, Belly. congrats

Poet Destroyer A

September 5, 2014 at 11:20 PM

Hi Belly:). Congratulations, on an awesome River Walk, Win:):):) Enjoy the smiles, and my blog, You're a "River Legend" if you'd like or have time. Always & Forever ~LINDA~