River Walk

no one dares falling, along the river stepping stones BB

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/26/2016 10:18:00 PM

Belly Bell, nice to see this one again. LINDA

Skat A

Date: 5/26/2015 5:29:00 PM

enjoyed a second time

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/7/2014 5:07:00 AM

- Hey Belly - Congratulations on winning poem in the contest: "River Walk" - Well done, I like it :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/6/2014 10:47:00 PM

'congrat to you, Belly.

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 9/6/2014 10:17:00 AM

Congratulations Belly.

Faye Gibson

Date: 9/6/2014 9:25:00 AM

Congrats on your win!

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 9/6/2014 8:03:00 AM

Congratulations on your fine win! Well deserved with this great senryu! Pandita

Jan Allison

Date: 9/6/2014 6:57:00 AM

so glad you changed the ending:-) many congrats Hugs jan xx

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/6/2014 5:07:00 AM

A great thought nicely crafted, Belly. congrats

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/5/2014 11:20:00 PM

Hi Belly:). Congratulations, on an awesome River Walk, Win:):):) Enjoy the smiles, and my blog, You're a "River Legend" if you'd like or have time. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Justin Bordner

Date: 8/28/2014 1:47:00 AM

I jumped in the damn river Bell, and it taught me how to swim. Xool poetry! J.A.B.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/26/2014 6:29:00 PM

LOL, watch out for them stepping stone... Just peeking in.... Linda

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/26/2014 5:38:00 PM

I dare! I'm ready to fall in and go for a swim. Good one Belly, best of luck to ya.

Jan Allison

Date: 8/26/2014 5:11:00 PM

maybe you could make it stepping stones rather than cobble stones. Good write and good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx