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River of Summer

River of summer, how long it gurgled on
To last in your beauty, crystal and veiled---
How innocent of us , we never dreamed.


18 Feb 2016
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River of Dreams

innocenceoceanmonoku

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Rhoma Em

February 22, 2016 at 2:03 PM

Congratulations on your win!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

February 21, 2016 at 10:41 PM

Congrats on ur awesome win with this wonderful monoku Noel..

Susan Gentry

February 21, 2016 at 2:29 PM

Congratulations on your win! Nice.

Eve Roper

February 21, 2016 at 1:32 PM

Noel, congratulations on your win Hugs Eve

Nette Onclaud

February 21, 2016 at 12:55 PM

wow, really a winner, noel... sweet congrats and thanks for your insights!

Andrea Dietrich

February 21, 2016 at 10:20 AM

I like your poem, NOel. Congrats for the win.

Poet Destroyer A

February 21, 2016 at 10:10 AM

Noel, Congratulations on your flowing win. Enjoyed the imagery. Stop by my latest blog "Oh Beautiful Dreams" if you'd like. Enjoy your wonderful win and day. ~LINDA~