River of Love

The river,

that fed the sea of their love has run dry

and now

their thirsty for affection hearts

pray to Eros for the rain of warmheartedness 

to come!








© Demetrios Trifiatis
     26 August 2018

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Anne-Lise Andresen

August 29, 2018 at 1:22 PM

- A beautiful poem, my friend :) - Fill up all the rivers :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maria Williams

August 27, 2018 at 4:46 AM

Beautiful thought for the day dearest Demetrios. we must pray for that river to be filled again....Maria xxx

Sunlite Wanter

August 26, 2018 at 4:56 PM

Oh, Demetrios, can we ever make the river go back upstream?

M. L. Kiser

August 26, 2018 at 2:25 PM

Beautifully penned.

Demetrios Trifiatis

August 26, 2018 at 4:00 PM

Delighted to receive your visit dearest, M.L.K. ! Thank you!

Winged Warrior

August 26, 2018 at 1:09 PM

Let it rain liquid love...loved it my friend...as always...love & light...^WW^

Demetrios Trifiatis

August 26, 2018 at 3:59 PM

God bless you WW, thank you my dear friend!

Besma Riabi Dziri

August 26, 2018 at 9:57 AM

Another piece of art and beauty dear Demetrios! A noble message of Love! Shall we invoke Eros, the God of Love to pour into our hearts oceans of love! The set of your pearls of wisdom is puzzling! You are amazing your reader with your generous words composed in a skillful and creative way! A brilliant Monoku! A FAV. Shine and be blessed always.

Demetrios Trifiatis

August 26, 2018 at 3:57 PM

I appreciate very much your visit and wondrous comment dear, Besma!!