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River of Dreams

River of Dreams Wave’s flowing through your mind, pictures in black and white, Graphics ever changing, like the TV channels at night, Tossing and turning in silence, a boat ride’s endless plight! Written By: Sarita A. Milliner © 2/18/16 Submitted for: River of dreams (three liner poem or 3 monoku) - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Poet Destroyer A

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Constance La France

Date: 3/12/2016 11:46:00 AM

Sarita, this is a great poem, congratulations and I am liking this 7 ~

Sarita Milliner
Date: 3/12/2016 12:15:00 PM

Thanks for the compliment, the rating and the congratulations, Broken Wings. Glad you enjoyed it!

Paul Callus

Date: 3/8/2016 4:34:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Sarita! These are 3 lovely and expressive monoku and I would have liked to see them higher up the list. #7 ~ Regards // paul

Sarita Milliner
Date: 3/8/2016 9:22:00 AM

Much appreciation to you Paul, for your kind words and congratulations.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/6/2016 6:57:00 PM

I see you have already won, congrats.

Sarita Milliner
Date: 3/6/2016 7:04:00 PM

That's ok! I appreciate the visit and the good wishes!!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/6/2016 6:56:00 PM

Good luck in Linda's contest! I love the water and welcome the tossing and turning but not so much the kind that prevents a restful sleep.

Sarita Milliner
Date: 3/6/2016 7:03:00 PM

Thanks Richard!!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 2/21/2016 11:16:00 PM

Congrats on ur awesome win with this wonderful monoku Sarita..

Sarita Milliner
Date: 2/23/2016 4:55:00 PM

Thanks, Dr Sharma!

Eve Roper

Date: 2/21/2016 9:27:00 PM

BEAUTIFUL VERSE !!Congratulations on your “River of Dreams” win , Sarita! Hugs Eve

Sarita Milliner
Date: 2/22/2016 9:04:00 AM

Thank you very much Eve!!

Susan Gentry

Date: 2/21/2016 7:24:00 PM

Congratulations! Great imagery.

Sarita Milliner
Date: 2/21/2016 8:10:00 PM

Thank you very much, Susan!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/21/2016 10:32:00 AM

I enjoyed this one. Congrats for your win.

Sarita Milliner
Date: 2/21/2016 10:43:00 AM

Thank you Andrea!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/21/2016 10:15:00 AM

Sarita, Congratulations on your flowing win. Enjoyed the imagery. Stop by my latest blog "Oh Beautiful Dreams" if you'd like. Enjoy your wonderful win and day. ~LINDA~

Sarita Milliner
Date: 2/21/2016 10:44:00 AM

Thanks for accepting my poem!!

Daniel Turner

Date: 2/18/2016 11:27:00 AM

Yes life can be tumultuous and ever changing. Rest well my friend, calm waters are around the bend:) Peace. Great write

Sarita Milliner
Date: 2/21/2016 10:44:00 AM

Thanks Daniel!!