Sarita Milliner Poet Monoku

River of Dreams

River of Dreams

Wave’s flowing through your mind, pictures in black and white,
Graphics ever changing, like the TV channels at night,
Tossing and turning in silence, a boat ride’s endless plight!

Written By: Sarita A. Milliner © 2/18/16
Submitted for: River of dreams (three liner poem or 3 monoku) - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Poet Destroyer A

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Constance La France March 12, 2016 at 11:46 AM Sarita, this is a great poem, congratulations and I am liking this 7 ~ Sarita Milliner March 12, 2016 at 12:15 PM Thanks for the compliment, the rating and the congratulations, Broken Wings. Glad you enjoyed it!

Paul Callus March 8, 2016 at 4:34 AM Congratulations on your win, Sarita! These are 3 lovely and expressive monoku and I would have liked to see them higher up the list. #7 ~ Regards // paul Sarita Milliner March 8, 2016 at 9:22 AM Much appreciation to you Paul, for your kind words and congratulations.

Richard Lamoureux March 6, 2016 at 6:57 PM I see you have already won, congrats. Sarita Milliner March 6, 2016 at 7:04 PM That's ok! I appreciate the visit and the good wishes!!

Richard Lamoureux March 6, 2016 at 6:56 PM Good luck in Linda's contest! I love the water and welcome the tossing and turning but not so much the kind that prevents a restful sleep. Sarita Milliner March 6, 2016 at 7:03 PM Thanks Richard!!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma February 21, 2016 at 11:16 PM Congrats on ur awesome win with this wonderful monoku Sarita.. Sarita Milliner February 23, 2016 at 4:55 PM Thanks, Dr Sharma!

Eve Roper February 21, 2016 at 9:27 PM BEAUTIFUL VERSE !!Congratulations on your “River of Dreams” win , Sarita! Hugs Eve Sarita Milliner February 22, 2016 at 9:04 AM Thank you very much Eve!!

Susan Gentry February 21, 2016 at 7:24 PM Congratulations! Great imagery. Sarita Milliner February 21, 2016 at 8:10 PM Thank you very much, Susan!

Andrea Dietrich February 21, 2016 at 10:32 AM I enjoyed this one. Congrats for your win. Sarita Milliner February 21, 2016 at 10:43 AM Thank you Andrea!!

Poet Destroyer A February 21, 2016 at 10:15 AM Sarita, Congratulations on your flowing win. Enjoyed the imagery. Stop by my latest blog "Oh Beautiful Dreams" if you'd like. Enjoy your wonderful win and day. ~LINDA~ Sarita Milliner February 21, 2016 at 10:44 AM Thanks for accepting my poem!!

Daniel Turner February 18, 2016 at 11:27 AM Yes life can be tumultuous and ever changing. Rest well my friend, calm waters are around the bend:) Peace. Great write Sarita Milliner February 21, 2016 at 10:44 AM Thanks Daniel!!