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Joseph May's A Poem Inspired By A Song Contest-- Old or New ~ new poem ~ inspiration from 'River Of Dreams ' by Matt Bianco 1999

River Of Dreams

A river lays still on a hush Of edges mild in deepened blue; Until her trail unfurls a change As if to wake from rare debut. Beneath the stars first dazzling rays Old marbles glaze on hillsides green-- To roll like jewels down the coast Embellishing her womb, serene. Dazed by the fluidity of This radiant bob...this duskfall thrill Mutes my whispers as seashells play, Requesting for a tide's refill. River of dreams , linger a while Where my bare heels might softly tread, On waterdance and air-tossed quays To where this heart is blithely led. River Of Dreams by Matt Bianco 1999 Singer Billy Joel used the same title, a different song altogether
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La France Avatar
December 1, 2025 at 3:49 AM
Nette, so beautiful and congratulations on your top win in the contest, I missed the deadline but wrote a poem called , I 'll Be Seeing You, Mom Constance
Vaso Avatar
November 30, 2025 at 10:42 PM
Beautiful I rad this because of the title, love rivers and lakes!
Gasun Avatar
November 29, 2025 at 7:01 PM
Outstanding piece my dear poet sis/friend! Belated Congrats! Thanks a lot for sharing your superb talent with us! Hugs . God bless you always.
Miller Avatar
November 27, 2025 at 1:12 AM
This is a wonderful poem Nette, congratulations on your high placement
Hind Avatar
November 25, 2025 at 4:23 PM
Enchanting, Nette. I love the flow of this poem, it's gorgeous
May Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 10:18 AM
Very nicely done Nette, Congrats on your win
Canerdy Avatar
November 23, 2025 at 3:41 PM
Such a beautiful poem, Nette. CONGRATS on your well-deserved win. Janice
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 19, 2025 at 3:28 PM
you've done the original poem with honor and beauty. Love it.
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 19, 2025 at 10:09 AM
Hello Nett ,I enjoyed this wonderful poem. This poem made me feel peaceful. It is also my fav. /Hugs. /Darlene/
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November 19, 2025 at 9:45 AM
I enjoyed reading. Your wonderful "River Of Dreams" write. "Good Luck" Have a Blessed day writing away..........
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