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River Mother

Springing from submerged breasts, engorged, mountainous mother-stream gushes pristinely clear primeval milk into hungry mouths - bird, beast, human; ancient as embryonic earth, she nurses sloping hills, nurtures dawning valleys, carving cradled nests in fecund soil, setting the stage for life's grand panoply. Faye Lanham Gibson © September 7, 2015

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Date: 9/19/2015 8:40:00 AM
Awesome work !! No wonder it is in the winners’ list. Congrats..Sara
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Date: 9/14/2015 4:32:00 PM
Such wonderful metaphors in your river theme imagery, Faye. Congratulations on your awesome win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 9/14/2015 1:28:00 PM
Faye, congrats on placing in Nette's awesome contest. SKAT
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Date: 9/14/2015 8:55:00 AM
AH, a metaphoric personification of a breast fed earth...ingenious take on the theme...
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Date: 9/14/2015 3:47:00 AM
Congrats on ur superb winning write Faye!
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Date: 9/14/2015 3:29:00 AM
faye, you did really "fill up my senses!"...this piece is charged with impact.. thank you for joining my contest and top congrats!
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Date: 9/8/2015 12:42:00 AM
Wow Faye its a superb write! Gl in contest, sure will fly high!
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