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River Moments a Six Pack of Senryu

the swans hiss
parental obligation
                       …warn the intruder

sunning turtles roll
drunks falling off of bar stools
                             …curse the kayaker

water lilies
mimicking ice cream cones
                             …licked by the bees

floating overhead
an Osprey admires himself
                            …a silent river

a pickerel darts
a frog croaks
            …not just wordplay

the Geese look surprised
a cool riffling of feathers
                          …instinctual need

John G. Lawless
©7/29/2022

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Date: 8/3/2022 5:23:00 PM
very entertaining. The title for the series is clever. MY favorite is licked by the bees
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Date: 8/1/2022 6:57:00 PM
These are amazing, John. Can't understand why I'm the only commenter... Maybe after those sunning turtles.... lol. Borderline brilliant here. Thanks, gw
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John Lawless
Date: 8/2/2022 4:50:00 AM
Thanks for stopping by Gershon, maybe they couldn't handle the six pack

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