River Minnows

See Heaven	
Or a little peep perhaps
Viewed unseen but in this summer light 
Minnow’s dark tops sides a lovely silver hidden
Mesmeric a contrary counter way shapes and shadows seen 
Green reeds softly sway the gentle flanking current persuades 
Lit the riverbed of soft golden sands transmuted a bronze by depth
Glistening yellow auric the strong suns noonday blazing light beams down  
Ancient buttress grey stone shaped by old artifice gives water a gentle pass
On the river bridge the weight an impetus of water a few feet down below
In the distance once bright garden colours given now soft focus by haze 
Comfy white cottages over the river resting in water meadows seen 
A self carved path by an enticement no choice drawn to the sea
The river flowing passing on its ancient meandering way
Sheep graze roaming enamoured of the warm grass
Scene of all basking in high summer sun
A pleasant walk down to the river
One of life’s sunshine days

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 12/21/2010 6:55:00 PM
I love this! I love the words, the phrasing, the visual look of it on the screen. This is a wonder to me. I have read several of your poems and will read more. ps. Thanks for the kind words re my poem 'Faith'. I did change it; hopefully without losing its original essence. It sounds better, flows better I think. But perhaps I should post the original and title it 'Not A Senyru?' Take care... Deb
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Date: 9/5/2010 3:18:00 PM
Loved this, sunshine days are the best, and you have captured this one amazingly.
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Date: 9/4/2010 7:25:00 PM
sounds like a nice day!! enjoyed reading!
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Date: 9/4/2010 3:42:00 PM
This brought back a lot of my childhood memories. Good stuff!
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Date: 9/4/2010 2:57:00 PM
love it, enjoyed your write..P.D.
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