River Lines Hidden Within

I know not where the water springs,
drips and drops, spurts and squirts melded
and aligned into flows downstream
trickling, merging to babbling brook

The myriads of river line sources
are hidden within, like puppeteers strings
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Vaso Avatar
March 2, 2017 at 9:14 PM
Nice, and the subtleties have such deep meanings!
Dietrich Avatar
March 2, 2017 at 7:16 PM
Very nice, JOhn. Good luck in the contest.
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