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Form River Line

12 Lines 9 syllables each

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River Lie Line An angry creek raged inside and out What had seemed placid and calm became Bobbing up and down his fog clouded Lighthouse distant glimmer deflecting Torched viewpoint fault line allocated Tsunami taking him further from Truths of the shoreline receding fast Guilty anchor culpable life line The buoy deflated cheating lie Lying exposed punctured flat He took one deep trustworthy breath Answered anger and swam for his life 01st December 2016

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Date: 12/1/2016 8:20:00 AM
Very impressive ... Very figurative ...
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 12/2/2016 2:42:00 AM
Thank you Probir. Many wishes, Kai
Date: 12/1/2016 7:15:00 AM
Hi Kai. Beautiful, so well done!
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 12/2/2016 2:42:00 AM
Hi Doug. Thank you for your appreciation...

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