Krish Radhakrishna Poet Haibun

River In Spring

The rivers must have stories to tell of years that they have seen life go by. Rabbits that frequent the shores and ducks that quack their way through! my shoes have left imprints on the ground due to rains from night before. Scent of flowers in the morning fresh air attracts lovers from all species around!

life’s drama on shore
desire to procreate more
trees breeze scents encore

Written 20/03/2021
Springtime Haibun 
M.L. Kaiser

prose part 67 syllables
haiku 5,7 5

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Sara Kendrick April 19, 2021 at 8:11 AM Congrats on this winner. Way to go. Spring is a time for renewal and new life. Sara Krish Radhakrishna April 19, 2021 at 10:28 AM Thanks Sara! 15 on the list but that is better than N/A! Happy it was placed

Malabika Ray Choudhury March 23, 2021 at 6:04 PM Lovely Haibun! Very original about rivers telling stories - life’s drama. Best ~ Mala Krish Radhakrishna March 26, 2021 at 7:27 AM thanks Mala. most civilisations grew next to the river from Pharos to Moses and to this day!