River In Early July

Flowing, sparkling, refreshingly clear
Dipped in my toes, ah yes too cold -just as I feared








For John Freemans Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Mehta Avatar
July 14, 2010 at 8:09 AM
Congrats on the 5th place win
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July 13, 2010 at 3:15 PM
PS--brings back childhood memories for me. Karen
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July 13, 2010 at 3:15 PM
Got a chuckle out of this one. Congratulations on being one of the winners in John's contest. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing!! Karen
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July 13, 2010 at 10:37 AM
Congratulations Molly on your win in John Freeman's contest "Give Wisdom It's Beauty" (a couple of lines). Love, Carol
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July 13, 2010 at 7:26 AM
Congrats Molly on your winning poem in the Wisdom contest with this powerful message in couplet form.. enjoy your big win.. with luv..
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July 13, 2010 at 3:55 AM
Even in Florida, spring-fed rivers are cold in the summer. Clever observation, Molly. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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July 13, 2010 at 12:51 AM
Smile, congratulations Molly on your success in the contest. agape, Moses
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July 12, 2010 at 12:55 PM
A very nice write, good luck in the contest. I enjoyed the read. Caryl
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