River Fall

pearl clouds perspire rain
crystalline charade veil fades 
lost in river's run


August 6, 2021


A Brian Strand 1,2, or 3 line Poetry Contest
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Gauthier Avatar
August 12, 2021 at 9:06 AM
Congrats, Lonna ~
Blodgett Avatar
August 15, 2021 at 11:31 AM
Thank you most kindly Line!
Kendrick Avatar
August 8, 2021 at 9:51 AM
Very descriptive and expressive winner. Way to go. Congrats. Sara
Blodgett Avatar
August 9, 2021 at 4:12 PM
Thank you Sara.
Dietrich Avatar
August 7, 2021 at 11:24 AM
This is top notch in my opinion. Congrats to you in the contest.
Blodgett Avatar
August 9, 2021 at 4:13 PM
What a very nice compliment Andrea. Thank you so very much!
Sambourne Avatar
August 7, 2021 at 8:06 AM
Strong memorable image. A very fine Haiku. Cheers, Brian
Blodgett Avatar
August 9, 2021 at 4:13 PM
I truly appreciate your comment Brian.
Alex Avatar
August 7, 2021 at 6:54 AM
Wow. Great! Congratulations on your win!
Blodgett Avatar
August 9, 2021 at 4:13 PM
Thanks so very much Christuraj!
Chamberlain Avatar
August 6, 2021 at 12:33 PM
I love the imagery of your Haiku. Thank you for sharing.
Blodgett Avatar
August 9, 2021 at 4:14 PM
Thank you for the nice compliment Joana!
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