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River Dock

Sun beaming along the stream reflection at its finest Early morning clouds on this day--when everything made sense Your window opened and I came through the fire To rescue you from yourself With love by the river dock

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 5/2/2017 10:06:00 AM
Wow, this was so cool Trisha. Very descriptive and a creative way of expressing your thoughts. I really love the picture this creates in my mind. I just read an article this morning about the riverfront in NYC and how it is changing and how it was before. It may not have been the setting you had in mind when you wrote this, but your poem took me there.
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Trisha Romano
Date: 5/2/2017 2:27:00 PM
Actually, it's funny you say that because when I wrote the poem, I had a river in my mind but not a specific one. Then one day, I was in Manhattan, and I was at Poet's House on River Terrace. I was overwhelmed with the serenity and beauty of the river and thought of this poem.

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