River Crab,River Crab

River crab , river crab,why do you not sleep?

I have opened my eyes to see the big and the small.
The mackerel that only sees the small sprat
And not the big shadow it casts on the river bank
Shall soon float in the smaller and hotter poll.

River crab, river crab,why do you not sleep?

I have opened my eyes to see all around me,
For what we ignore  today and say it is harmless
Tomorrow often casts big shadow on our path.
Brutus once bragged; Antony is a small ant.

River crab , river crab, why do you not sleep?

I have prohibited sleep from my eyes
To pay attention with due diligence
To everything at  the river bank 
Mama had warned me at my birth:
Even the smallest ant casts long shadow;
No matter how minute a factor, 
She said it is a factor.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Thirtyseven Avatar
February 19, 2015 at 4:16 AM
You've written a great poem here. Like some below I really liked your crab, and the whole concept of this poem. Gripping last line. Congrats on your placing in the comp.
Haight Avatar
February 16, 2015 at 3:31 PM
Very clever and nice words of wisdom here! Congratulations on your nice win, Kayod5. Hugs, Sandra
Jones Avatar
February 16, 2015 at 1:35 PM
This is a really wonderful job.:-) :-) much congratulations on your win
Kendrick Avatar
February 16, 2015 at 12:50 PM
Unique work penned for the contest..I enjoyed reading it..Congrats on your win..Sara
A  Avatar
February 16, 2015 at 12:54 AM
Kayod5, , CONGRATULATIONS! nice Win* SKAT
Allison Avatar
February 15, 2015 at 10:25 AM
Wise words indeed a great pen - many congrats:-) Hugs jan xx
Carmack Avatar
February 14, 2015 at 10:29 PM
Congrats on your win with this one.
Smith Avatar
January 4, 2015 at 12:46 PM
Very clever poetic lesson, dear friend.. Excellent!!!... Hugs.. Arlene
Kayode Avatar
January 4, 2015 at 3:37 PM
God bless you Arlene...huggs
Lamoureux Avatar
January 4, 2015 at 8:29 AM
You write with much wisdom. An ant is a fitting metophor. I would list this one as personification because you imbue the Crab with the ability to speak and have complex thought.
Kayode Avatar
January 4, 2015 at 9:42 AM
Thank you very much Richard and how is your Weekend? Have a rewarding week ahead...huggs
May Avatar
January 4, 2015 at 4:18 AM
Very nicely penned Kayode...best wishes
Kayode Avatar
January 4, 2015 at 9:43 AM
Thank you Joseph,have a nice week ahead...huggs
Guzzi Avatar
January 3, 2015 at 7:42 PM
So true small is a relative thing. Light & Love
Kayode Avatar
January 3, 2015 at 11:03 PM
Thank you Debbie,happy Sunday...huggs
Hamilton Avatar
January 3, 2015 at 3:33 PM
very good poem Kayod a wise message hugs
Kayode Avatar
January 3, 2015 at 3:35 PM
Thank you Shadow, I am happy you love it..huggs
Callus Avatar
January 3, 2015 at 3:28 PM
I too have learnt never to underestimate anyone! Were we not advised to be alert and be ever watchful! This is another clever presentation Kayode; I would be pleased to see it on the winners' list. #7 // paul
Kayode Avatar
January 3, 2015 at 3:37 PM
Thank you Paul,I am happy you love it. How is your Weekend?
Dietrich Avatar
January 3, 2015 at 10:19 AM
YOu did well with this one! soupmail.
Kayode Avatar
January 3, 2015 at 11:25 AM
Thank you Andrea for you efforts and have a lovely Weekend...huggs
M V Avatar
January 3, 2015 at 9:44 AM
Good write! Keep write on. Thanks for your nice words on my poem Regards
Kayode Avatar
January 3, 2015 at 9:56 AM
Thanks Fabiyas, have a lovely Weekend...huggs
Smith Avatar
January 3, 2015 at 7:44 AM
Excellent philosophy to keep one safe...huggs
Kayode Avatar
January 3, 2015 at 7:48 AM
Thank you my friend Tim,have a wonderful Weekend...huggs
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