River Analogy My Life - Before and After You

There lives a river
Water never flows
you came on the bank
Threw a stone
It became instill
you enjoyed it
It enjoyed it 
you got bored 
It was left abandoned
It’s again the same river
Water never flows
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Makama Avatar
May 20, 2016 at 6:32 AM
I love this piece so much. What a really hot newbie you are. Will be looking forward to more of this. A definite 7
Panwar Avatar
May 21, 2016 at 1:14 AM
Thank you so much mate. This is my personal favorite. I am glad you liked it and cared to encourage. :)
A  Avatar
April 25, 2016 at 8:25 PM
sharaj panwar, you did well here. SKAT
Panwar Avatar
April 29, 2016 at 2:57 AM
SKAT thanks a lot for encouragement :)
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