River

tiny wavelets sang
sonorous songs in delight -
dozing river woke


Second Place in Haiku Or Senyru Poetry Contest sponsored by Constance La France

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Gazlam Motaung

November 9, 2025 at 1:51 AM

Beautiful words from your beautiful mind!Well done.I adore your wring style

Pratap Roy

October 31, 2021 at 7:48 PM

Congratulation.... Nicely written; Liked it. God bless you.

Anisha Dutta

August 11, 2020 at 8:58 PM

Pleasant haiku. I am charmed. Picture is too nice. Congrats to win.

Jenish Somadas

August 11, 2020 at 10:15 PM

Thank you Anisha for your delightful words of appreciation.. Have a great day...

Janice Canerdy

August 10, 2020 at 6:00 AM

Such a lovely haiku, Jenish! Janice

Jenish Somadas

August 11, 2020 at 10:14 PM

Thank you Janice..

Line Gauthier

August 2, 2020 at 5:04 AM

Charming. Congrats on your win, Jenish ~

Jenish Somadas

August 4, 2020 at 10:21 PM

Thank you Line...

Kai Michael Neumann

July 30, 2020 at 5:22 AM

Beautiful. Congratulations. Kind wishes, Kai

Jenish Somadas

July 30, 2020 at 9:39 PM

Thank you Kai..

Constance La France

July 29, 2020 at 4:53 PM

Jenish, congratulations on your win in my haiku contest with this wonderful write and I love your image too _Constance

Jenish Somadas

July 29, 2020 at 8:54 PM

Thank you Constance for the contest and your support..

Aditi Mishra

July 28, 2020 at 12:06 PM

This is a fave for me Jenish! Every line is delightful and soothing. Congratulations on your win! :)

Jenish Somadas

July 28, 2020 at 9:39 PM

Thank you Aditi..You made my day..

Patri Venkata Ramana

July 28, 2020 at 3:10 AM

dozing river woke....Wonderful haiku. Congrats.

Jenish Somadas

July 28, 2020 at 3:32 AM

Thank you Patri.. Have a great day..

Paul Callus

July 27, 2020 at 12:11 PM

Congratulations on your fine win, Jenish! Imagery and personification are worthy of mention. Regards // paul

Jenish Somadas

July 27, 2020 at 9:35 PM

Thank you Paul for your delightful comment.. Have a great day...

Edward Ibeh

July 27, 2020 at 3:16 AM

Wonderful haiku, Jenish:-) Heartiest congratulations on your win!

Jenish Somadas

July 27, 2020 at 3:54 AM

Thank you Edward for your kind support..

V. Deepa

July 27, 2020 at 1:10 AM

Dozing river woke:-) such a cute imagery jenish sir..Loved the displayed picture too. Congratulations on your wonderful win:-)keep inspiring.Warmest regards to you.:-)

Jenish Somadas

July 27, 2020 at 1:42 AM

Thank you Deepa for your delightful comment.. Have a great day..

Andrea Dietrich

July 26, 2020 at 7:34 PM

this is precious. I really like the little story in this , Jenish! Congrats.

Jenish Somadas

July 26, 2020 at 10:29 PM

Thank you Andrea for your support..

Eve Roper

July 26, 2020 at 4:08 PM

Jenish, congratulations on your win with these beautiful verse. Hugs Eve

Jenish Somadas

July 26, 2020 at 10:29 PM

Thank you Eve..

Jan Allison

July 26, 2020 at 3:57 PM

such delightful imagery Jenish, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Jenish Somadas

July 26, 2020 at 10:28 PM

Thank you Jan...

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 26, 2020 at 11:13 AM

- Congratulations on your great haiku, Jenish :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jenish Somadas

July 26, 2020 at 10:28 PM

Thank you Anne..

Harry Horsman

July 23, 2020 at 7:43 AM

Love this, a picture of words.

Jenish Somadas

July 24, 2020 at 6:04 AM

Thank you Harry for your support...

Gershon Wolf

July 23, 2020 at 6:12 AM

Oh, this is good!! From the incredible photo to each and every word of your richly tapestried haiku! A winner for sure, Jenish! Best wishes, Gershon

Jenish Somadas

July 24, 2020 at 6:03 AM

Thank you Gershon for your support.. Have a great day..

Heidi Sands

July 23, 2020 at 6:04 AM

Beautiful Jenish :)

Jenish Somadas

July 24, 2020 at 6:03 AM

Thank you Heidi..

Demetrios Trifiatis

July 23, 2020 at 6:00 AM

Dearest, Jenish, although I commented on your superb Haiku which I have Favored , my comment doesn't appear here. Therefore I favored it again. Hope this time it will show up.

Jenish Somadas

July 24, 2020 at 6:03 AM

Thank you Demetrios for your support.. Have a great day..