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tiny wavelets sang sonorous songs in delight - dozing river woke Second Place in Haiku Or Senyru Poetry Contest sponsored by Constance La France

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Date: 8/11/2020 8:58:00 PM
Pleasant haiku. I am charmed. Picture is too nice. Congrats to win.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 8/11/2020 10:15:00 PM
Thank you Anisha for your delightful words of appreciation.. Have a great day...
Date: 8/10/2020 6:00:00 AM
Such a lovely haiku, Jenish! Janice
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 8/11/2020 10:14:00 PM
Thank you Janice..
Date: 8/2/2020 5:04:00 AM
Charming. Congrats on your win, Jenish ~
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 8/4/2020 10:21:00 PM
Thank you Line...
Date: 7/30/2020 5:22:00 AM
Beautiful. Congratulations. Kind wishes, Kai
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/30/2020 9:39:00 PM
Thank you Kai..
Date: 7/29/2020 4:53:00 PM
Jenish, congratulations on your win in my haiku contest with this wonderful write and I love your image too _Constance
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/29/2020 8:54:00 PM
Thank you Constance for the contest and your support..
Date: 7/28/2020 12:06:00 PM
This is a fave for me Jenish! Every line is delightful and soothing. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/28/2020 9:39:00 PM
Thank you Aditi..You made my day..
Date: 7/28/2020 3:10:00 AM
dozing river woke....Wonderful haiku. Congrats.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/28/2020 3:32:00 AM
Thank you Patri.. Have a great day..
Date: 7/27/2020 12:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your fine win, Jenish! Imagery and personification are worthy of mention. Regards // paul
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/27/2020 9:35:00 PM
Thank you Paul for your delightful comment.. Have a great day...
Date: 7/27/2020 3:16:00 AM
Wonderful haiku, Jenish:-) Heartiest congratulations on your win!
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/27/2020 3:54:00 AM
Thank you Edward for your kind support..
Date: 7/27/2020 1:10:00 AM
Dozing river woke:-) such a cute imagery jenish sir..Loved the displayed picture too. Congratulations on your wonderful win:-)keep inspiring.Warmest regards to you.:-)
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/27/2020 1:42:00 AM
Thank you Deepa for your delightful comment.. Have a great day..
Date: 7/26/2020 7:34:00 PM
this is precious. I really like the little story in this , Jenish! Congrats.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/26/2020 10:29:00 PM
Thank you Andrea for your support..
Date: 7/26/2020 4:08:00 PM
Jenish, congratulations on your win with these beautiful verse. Hugs Eve
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/26/2020 10:29:00 PM
Thank you Eve..
Date: 7/26/2020 3:57:00 PM
such delightful imagery Jenish, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/26/2020 10:28:00 PM
Thank you Jan...
Date: 7/26/2020 11:13:00 AM
- Congratulations on your great haiku, Jenish :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/26/2020 10:28:00 PM
Thank you Anne..
Date: 7/23/2020 7:43:00 AM
Love this, a picture of words.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/24/2020 6:04:00 AM
Thank you Harry for your support...
Date: 7/23/2020 6:30:00 AM
Wow! What a delightful, enchanting and glorious pen. I love all the imagery in such few words. A winner! Chantelle hugs
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/24/2020 6:04:00 AM
Thank you Chantelle for your delightful comment.. Have a great day..
Date: 7/23/2020 6:12:00 AM
Oh, this is good!! From the incredible photo to each and every word of your richly tapestried haiku! A winner for sure, Jenish! Best wishes, Gershon
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/24/2020 6:03:00 AM
Thank you Gershon for your support.. Have a great day..
Date: 7/23/2020 6:04:00 AM
Beautiful Jenish :)
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/24/2020 6:03:00 AM
Thank you Heidi..
Date: 7/23/2020 6:00:00 AM
Dearest, Jenish, although I commented on your superb Haiku which I have Favored , my comment doesn't appear here. Therefore I favored it again. Hope this time it will show up.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/24/2020 6:03:00 AM
Thank you Demetrios for your support.. Have a great day..
Date: 7/23/2020 4:44:00 AM
I hear the rhythm of your write--well done, Jenish.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/23/2020 4:57:00 AM
Thank you for the support Vijay..
Date: 7/22/2020 9:42:00 PM
What a lovely sound to wake up to ... Very sweet Haiku, Thank you, Jenish
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/22/2020 9:48:00 PM
Thank you Shirley.. Have a lovely day..
Date: 7/22/2020 9:09:00 PM
very nice, enjoyed this
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/22/2020 9:37:00 PM
Thank you Joseph..