Rival Players In Dangerous Rough Waters

Rival Players in Dangerous Rough Waters 

brimming
swimming 
skimming
trimming 
Champ rivals are brimming, swimming prize, 
stunned watching the skimming, trimming lies.


1-19-2018


Poetry Contest: WRITE ME A TYBURN
Sponsored by: Kim Rodrigues
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Babu Avatar
January 25, 2018 at 10:02 PM
Wow......this is a nice one...Good Luck for this contest Eve. Regards, Sathya
Dietrich Avatar
January 22, 2018 at 6:35 PM
I still can't do this one. Uggg, and it's filling up so fast!!!!
Dietrich Avatar
January 20, 2018 at 7:53 PM
I sure gotta get my own thinking cap on now.
Dietrich Avatar
January 20, 2018 at 7:53 PM
Nicely done, Eve. I remember doing one of these long ago. They are very difficult to do. Good for you accomplishing it!
Horne Avatar
January 20, 2018 at 1:58 PM
love this - must try this interesting form
Smith Avatar
January 20, 2018 at 12:27 PM
excellent entry Eve, best wishes...
Tripp Avatar
January 20, 2018 at 11:21 AM
You nailed the tyburn. Not an easy task. Kudos, Eve.
One Avatar
January 20, 2018 at 9:29 AM
Great theme for this contest Eve..
Pandit Avatar
January 20, 2018 at 6:48 AM
Lovely rhyming arrangement of choice words..best for a win, Eve.
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