Ritual

Fills me with pain this morning
Tears cry
until now, I'm with practice these rituals
And cracked my inside victories to  defeats
when comes a flood pulse
To salvation
my Dream hanging on the wall of the distance
 imprisoned between sadness daily
Approaching my pain just a wrench
Waiting for someone else to answer
Despite surprising outlook
I can see all windows
Choose all direction
One hundred way of salvation for my soul
To kill the silence inside me
Fresher my words at saliva of the tongue
m voice along sight
But thing stays
Still my spiritual melt
Give it to me ….  A last time.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 8/23/2016 5:12:00 PM
"Dream hanging on the wall of the distance..." I really like this line. The poem takes a turn in tone that brings with it a glimpse of peaceful comfort in me, indescribable as is may be, yet closer to something worth more and more each read. Thank you for sharing. W.
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Date: 8/6/2016 11:49:00 AM
This is awesome and fantastic. I love it in every way. Lovely, lovely, so lovely.
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Abdel Latif Moubarak
Date: 8/7/2016 12:29:00 PM
The pleasure of your presence .... thank you
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