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Rainbow

Ritual

It should be more than a Jeopardy* answer,
that glass-half-full should shimmer
as if joy can be captured in a simple act of water.

She drinks artesian from a crystal carafe,
pours it carefully into the crystal goblet
spilling not a single drop of the life-giver.

Toasting the sun was their morning ritual,
the light casting sparkles and rainbow colors,
You are my rainbow he said that last morning…

His crystal goblet now empty forever.


*Television gameshow, category “Full” House
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 19, 2025 at 3:24 PM
awww...so engaging and sad at the end. Faving.
Achara Avatar
November 19, 2025 at 4:26 PM
Thank you. Many of my poems end up being sad. *sigh*
Bayles Avatar
November 19, 2025 at 2:42 PM
Such great imagery and language. And such a surprising ending. I wonder what the narrator sees now.
Achara Avatar
November 19, 2025 at 3:21 PM
Thank you for your kind comments. Hmm, perhaps another poem?
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