Rising Sun At the Waters Edge

A rising sun at the waters’ edge 
Washes its’ warm rays over your body.
In a fairy tale of daydreams, thoughts are retrieved.
Is it possible you can open your heart to receive?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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October 10, 2018 at 1:05 AM
Great question in the last line. Hope the answer is that it IS possible! Best wishes, Gershon
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October 10, 2018 at 8:45 AM
Gershon, I appreciate you taking time to read and write comments on this and some of my other poems. Sanford
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