Russell Sivey Poet Ottava rima

Rising Sun

The scene appears before me with a light
From the sun a great mighty ball of fire
The morning light sparkles losing the night
There’s love from the sun, the moon to retire
From the top of a hill this is a sight
The clouds all have formations I desire
Spectacular feelings is what I share
When the sun rises up from over there

Russell Sivey

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Demetrios Trifiatis May 5, 2013 at 3:47 PM You have created a masterpiece painting with words!

Jack Horne May 5, 2013 at 2:53 PM awesome write, my friend. Sorry I missed your contest - trouble with my computer and my ex,,,

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Jack Ellison May 5, 2013 at 11:22 AM Absolutely loved Donna's response to your beautiful poem my good fiend! I second, third and forth the motion! Cheers!

Donna Jones May 5, 2013 at 6:46 AM Russell...this is one of my favorites from you...very alive!!!! Sounds as though you are standing atop a mountain close to the clouds reaching for sunrise...feeling the warmth....awesome...

Poet Destroyer A May 5, 2013 at 6:36 AM Good morning, Russell -A beautiful morning it has been so far. Thanks for sharing the lovely scene before your eyes. The spectacular feeling goes a long way my poet friend. The sun rising over there looks as lovely as the sun rising here in my back year. The picture and imagery is perfect ~Always *LINDA

Sara Kendrick May 5, 2013 at 6:19 AM Very descriptive and expressive work..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for your visits..Your comments are much appreciated..Soup Mail Soon..Sara