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Rising Sun

Peeping eye, Out of the dreams, The streams, The reflections, Of a calm night, Beautiful sight, Shine again, Brighten the shore, Deep to the core, And bring out, The inner light, Of life, Beautiful bright, Kissing the sea, Make us see, A new day, Through your eyes. Word Craft 2013

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/8/2013 3:06:00 AM
Word, I admire your "Rising Sun" ... it's gorgeous! - The sun gives me joy and peace in mind. - I want to share my sunset with you: "Sensual And Beautiful" - Hope your week will be full of sunshine and joy. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Opondi Ougo
Date: 4/8/2013 3:53:00 AM
Wow perfect harmony Anne..the two really blend beautifully..."Rising Sun" is a piece i did at Village market after the painting of one Chandvi Shah..she was exhibiting her work there...immediately i got into the exhibition hall that painting caught me soo deeply..that i asked for a leaf and wrote what i felt about it..then asked for the artist behind the work..and the rest is history :-)
Date: 4/3/2013 8:17:00 AM
Great write!! You are talented..and you've become a fav of mine.
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Date: 4/8/2013 3:40:00 AM
I'm so humbled Script..i dont know what to say...thank you a lot and do have a beautiful week :-)
Date: 3/15/2013 11:46:00 AM
A nice read :)
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Date: 4/3/2013 5:36:00 AM
Oh thank you so much Gypsy..for your encouraging comments...i'm much humbled :-)
Date: 2/19/2013 5:20:00 AM
amazing
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Opondi Ougo
Date: 2/21/2013 1:04:00 AM
thank you Betty...:-)
Date: 2/13/2013 3:05:00 PM
word craft?
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Opondi Ougo
Date: 2/14/2013 4:06:00 AM
Oh..yeah dear...that's him...lol :-)
Date: 2/13/2013 9:18:00 AM
Like the imagery you painted here... Thanks for sharing and welcome to the Soup...
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Date: 2/14/2013 4:08:00 AM
Oh...deep thanks Veetil...and thanks for your kind gesture i feel welcome already :-)
Date: 2/13/2013 7:34:00 AM
Lovely poem :) enjoyed your words tonight :D - hug, yanny
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Date: 2/14/2013 4:10:00 AM
aaww...thank you lots Yanny..and you made my day...hugs..:-)
Date: 2/13/2013 7:15:00 AM
An excellent poetic image! Give you a 7!
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Date: 2/14/2013 4:11:00 AM
You always humble me sir....Thank you..i'm still a learner :-)

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