Rising Sun

Peeping eye,
Out of the dreams,
The streams,
The reflections,
Of a calm night,
Beautiful sight,
Shine again,
Brighten the shore,
Deep to the core,
And bring out,
The inner light,
Of life,
Beautiful bright,
Kissing the sea,
Make us see,
A new day,
Through your eyes.

Word Craft
2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Andresen Avatar
April 8, 2013 at 3:06 AM
Word, I admire your "Rising Sun" ... it's gorgeous! - The sun gives me joy and peace in mind. - I want to share my sunset with you: "Sensual And Beautiful" - Hope your week will be full of sunshine and joy. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Ougo Avatar
April 8, 2013 at 3:53 AM
Wow perfect harmony Anne..the two really blend beautifully..."Rising Sun" is a piece i did at Village market after the painting of one Chandvi Shah..she was exhibiting her work there...immediately i got into the exhibition hall that painting caught me soo deeply..that i asked for a leaf and wrote what i felt about it..then asked for the artist behind the work..and the rest is history :-)
Ink-U-Script Avatar
April 3, 2013 at 8:17 AM
Great write!! You are talented..and you've become a fav of mine.
Ougo Avatar
April 8, 2013 at 3:40 AM
I'm so humbled Script..i dont know what to say...thank you a lot and do have a beautiful week :-)
Essence Avatar
March 15, 2013 at 11:46 AM
A nice read :)
Ougo Avatar
April 3, 2013 at 5:36 AM
Oh thank you so much Gypsy..for your encouraging comments...i'm much humbled :-)
Bolden Avatar
February 19, 2013 at 5:20 AM
amazing
Ougo Avatar
February 21, 2013 at 1:04 AM
thank you Betty...:-)
Veetil Avatar
February 13, 2013 at 9:18 AM
Like the imagery you painted here... Thanks for sharing and welcome to the Soup...
Ougo Avatar
February 14, 2013 at 4:08 AM
Oh...deep thanks Veetil...and thanks for your kind gesture i feel welcome already :-)
Widjanarko Avatar
February 13, 2013 at 7:34 AM
Lovely poem :) enjoyed your words tonight :D - hug, yanny
Ougo Avatar
February 14, 2013 at 4:10 AM
aaww...thank you lots Yanny..and you made my day...hugs..:-)
Trifiatis Avatar
February 13, 2013 at 7:15 AM
An excellent poetic image! Give you a 7!
Ougo Avatar
February 14, 2013 at 4:11 AM
You always humble me sir....Thank you..i'm still a learner :-)
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