Rising Sun

Rising sun breaks the early chill,

stirring the wild from a long cold sleep.

Spring flowers bursting on the hill,

with dark Red Buds in forests deep, 

under fluffy clouds, white like sheep.


Singing birds in light green trees,

while squirrels chase lovers at play.

The humming sound of bumble bees,

above the ants toiling all day,

as a fish jumps, flashing suns ray.




for the Spring day English Quintain contest.

Feb. 7, 2012
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Merryman Avatar
February 27, 2012 at 5:53 PM
Congrats on your win, Christopher! Love, Kim
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February 27, 2012 at 6:31 PM
Thank You!
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February 27, 2012 at 5:04 PM
You composed a great poem, Christopher ! Congratulations on your win. Let Spring come to you!!! :) Best, iolanda
Bunton Avatar
February 27, 2012 at 6:31 PM
Thank You!
Brown Avatar
February 26, 2012 at 5:28 PM
Congratulations on your win in Francine's "English Quintain" contest Christopher. Love, Carol
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February 27, 2012 at 10:54 AM
Thank You!
Johnson Avatar
February 26, 2012 at 5:28 PM
A perfect Quintain. Congratulations. Christopher. Love, Joyce
Bunton Avatar
February 27, 2012 at 10:55 AM
Thank you!
Dietrich Avatar
February 26, 2012 at 3:40 PM
This is sure cute, Christopher. Big Congrats for your well deserved win.
Bunton Avatar
February 27, 2012 at 10:54 AM
Thank you!
Sweetheart Avatar
February 26, 2012 at 2:01 PM
congrats Christopher on a well deserved win for this beautiful write on Spring luv..
Bunton Avatar
February 27, 2012 at 10:54 AM
Thank You!
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
February 26, 2012 at 4:06 AM
Congratulations Christopher on your win lovely piecc xx
Bunton Avatar
February 26, 2012 at 1:24 PM
Thank you!!
Roberts Avatar
February 25, 2012 at 11:13 PM
congrats on your win in the contest Christopher
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February 26, 2012 at 1:24 PM
Thank You!
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