Dr. Upma A. Sharma Poet Free verse

Rising In Love

Falling in love





A soulful embrace
that takes you to heavens,
When hearts rhyme
and minds resonate,
Savouring its taste
is living eternity,
Falling in love, first love
is like being on cloud nine,
When days turn bright
and colours vibrant,
Melody every moment
dances to the subtle tune,
Beauty in each sight
longing for dark nights,
Plucked strings of nature
and as pitch of notes peaks
we rise in love !





Written Sept 30th, 2015
For contest by Aiyah

Missed to enter contest

Now entered for contest "Best love poem#3" 
Sponsor- SKAT A

Awarded 8th place win

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Kayod5 Kayode November 21, 2015 at 1:54 AM "...Falling in love, first love is like being on cloud nine, When days turn bright and colours vibrant, Melody every moment dances to the subtle tune, Beauty in each sight longing for dark nights,..." This is just wonderful Upma,but what is it being in cloud nine ? I will love to know; congrats and hugs.

Skat A November 21, 2015 at 12:29 AM Dr. Upma :) Congratulations on your placement. ThanXs for supporting my contest. <3 Love SKAT

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores October 21, 2015 at 7:17 AM Excellent poem Dr. Sharma.

Dr. Vandana Sharma October 14, 2015 at 12:44 AM Life is beautiful when one has such kind of love, where the two souls rise and cherish everything they have :)

James Inman October 12, 2015 at 8:06 AM Very beautifully written.

Connie Marcum Wong October 10, 2015 at 5:14 AM I love the creative way you ended this poem "plucked strings of nature and as pitch of notes peaks we rise in love !" Sorry you missed entering the contest. This would surely have been a winner!

Robert Lindley October 3, 2015 at 9:27 PM A glowing poem and a happy dance in life's radiance my friend! A7

Emile Pinet October 1, 2015 at 6:39 PM You managed to nicely capture the scene and the ambiance of the moment well. Emile.

Bob Atkinson September 30, 2015 at 1:39 AM Especially ponder #1. Regards, Bob http://poetry-critic.blogspot.com/2015/09/tolstoy-art-criticism.html

Julia Ward September 30, 2015 at 1:14 AM Pure happiness is expressed here! Your poem has radiance. Julia, with my kind regards.