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Rising In Love

The mind rises in Love and the heart lets fall its tears The soul longs to reach what is above and the pain mends its fears The night unveils its shades and the dream reveals its joys then disappears The moon drops its light and a blissful air the very soul wears. ***** What is within even under words skin hard to see decrypt and read A ravishing power a true Light In the broad extent of dark I would hide. ***** A treasure.. a gift from the divine that expands the world of the heart feeds a craving fuels a life and here I am rising.. in Love, I rise. ***** A force waving into my soul drifting a bewildered whole as the hand of God traces a path weaves a life I just have to quieten a storm sense a bond and willing be to attain a goal. ***** The mind rises in Love and the heart lets fall its tears The soul longs to reach what is above and the pain mends its fears The night unveils its shades and the dream reveals its joys then disappears The moon drops its light and a blissful air the very soul wears.

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Justin Bordner

Date: 3/25/2020 2:37:00 AM

A love surge strong enough to send souls to the sun. "What is within even under words skin..." Transform the storm into sunshine Poetess...J.A.B.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 3/25/2020 4:07:00 PM

We rise whenever the heart is filled to the brim with sublime beauty.. we rise whenever the mind quenches a thirst and wipes out its darkness.. A profound poetry is your feedback, Justin! Thank you so much.. I highly appreciate the precious time and great responses to my humble poetry.. My deepest regards and blessings.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 12/2/2019 8:38:00 AM

Besma my dear friend, life is so hectic, but must always make time always to read your wonderful creative soulful writes - I sincerely enjoy them - your opening and closing verses give this poem great appeal! So gracefully do you write about the soul, for without a soul there is no love and without love there is no heart - God is our path to everything, Our Omniscient Omnipotent God. Love your talented write as always my dear friend. Miss you - Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 12/9/2019 9:56:00 AM

Miss you too dear Jenny! I am deeply touched by your kindness and loving words soul sister.. indeed time is sometimes a foe.. denying us to relish moments in time with loving beautiful souls sharing the passion for poetry.. always a great pleasure to see you dear sweet friend despite time and distance.. love and hugs. Blessings.

Maria Williams

Date: 11/19/2019 4:45:00 AM

I love the way you have formatted your poem dearest Besma. I was quite surprised to see that Vijay had actually described it the way I would have. Took the words out of my mouth. Lol. perfectly, 'opening and closing arguments serving ably as bookends to your superb message'. What I would like to add to that is your beautiful messages between are Encapsulated in Love. A truly loving Soul, pens beautiful poetry like this that captures the intensity of love. A lovely Gem for the fave list....Maria Hugs and xxxs

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 11/21/2019 2:43:00 PM

Wow, dearest Maria! I relish in such a wholehearted response.. I am so glad I connect with your profound soul and my feelings and thoughts reach and touch the depth of your beautiful soul.. grateful to you my sweet friend for your sincere words on my humble person and work.. blessed and happy always be.. Love and hugs.

Pashang Salehi

Date: 11/17/2019 11:41:00 PM

The only thing that we need more of... is more love... beautiful...

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 11/21/2019 2:14:00 PM

Honoured and delighted by your graceful visit and genuine words, Pashang.. thank you so much.. Best regards and blessings.

Silent One

Date: 11/16/2019 5:36:00 PM

I have seen your poetry develop so well.. Your vocabulary has improved and it shows in your poem...This flows so well.. you are a real word weaver now... A great achievement as English is probably your third language..

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 11/17/2019 4:58:00 AM

Always a learner on every single path of Life.. trying to inhale from the wells of knowledge.. aspiring to attain levels of Beauty.. looking up to beautiful minds and generous souls that have a say and prove the reason for their existence.. blessed to walk a path of Poetry trodden by dear fellow poets and friends on PS and Honoured to learn from.. thank you so much, Silent One for so beautiful and elevating a feedback! An honour and a great delight. Regards

Robert Lindley

Date: 11/16/2019 4:42:00 PM

What is Life If it has, sees, or feels no love? The Soul the Spirit, the Heart and the Mind all need its Lights, its Bounty and its Magnificent Gifts! Surely such are the sweetest Treasures that Life can offer. Your very fine poem gives that as its primary message to me and is truly a welcomed gift and a most inspiring one to receive.. A fav- a true and gleaming gem too.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 11/17/2019 4:41:00 AM

Deeply humbled by the depth of your poetic and insightful response to my humble work, Robert.. with every single footfall on the path of Life we do rise in Love and Beauty.. thank you so much for adding a lot of depth into my humble work.. my honour and pleasure.. Regards and blessings.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/16/2019 2:37:00 PM

I like the way your first stanza makes both the opening and closing arguments serving ably as bookend to your superb message: The mind rises in Love and the heart lets fall its tears The soul longs to reach what is above and the pain mends its fears. Superb poetry, Besma. Enjoyed the read and your message.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 11/17/2019 4:36:00 AM

Always grateful to you dear Vijay for your sincere concern and great support to my humble poetry.. with such genuine encouragement and elevating feedback, my pen will be able to climb the ladder of Beauty.. thank you so much from the depth of my heart.. Best regards and blessings.