Besma Riabi Dziri Poet Free verse

Rising In Love

The mind rises in Love
and the heart lets fall its tears
The soul longs to reach what is above
and the pain mends its fears
The night unveils its shades 
and the dream reveals its joys then disappears
The moon drops its light
and a blissful air the very soul wears.

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What is within
even under words skin
hard to see
decrypt  and read
A ravishing power
a true Light
In the broad extent of dark
I would hide.

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A treasure..
a gift from the divine
that expands the world of the heart
feeds a craving
fuels a life
and here I am
rising..
in Love, I rise.

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A force waving into my soul
drifting a bewildered whole
as the hand of God
traces a path
weaves a life
I just have to quieten a storm
sense a bond
and willing be to attain a goal.

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The mind rises in Love
and the heart lets fall its tears
The soul longs to reach what is above
and the pain mends its fears
The night unveils its shades
and the dream reveals its joys then disappears
The moon drops its light
and a blissful air the very soul wears.

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Justin Bordner March 25, 2020 at 2:37 AM A love surge strong enough to send souls to the sun. "What is within even under words skin..." Transform the storm into sunshine Poetess...J.A.B. Besma Riabi Dziri March 25, 2020 at 4:07 PM We rise whenever the heart is filled to the brim with sublime beauty.. we rise whenever the mind quenches a thirst and wipes out its darkness.. A profound poetry is your feedback, Justin! Thank you so much.. I highly appreciate the precious time and great responses to my humble poetry.. My deepest regards and blessings.

Jennifer Proxenos December 2, 2019 at 8:38 AM Besma my dear friend, life is so hectic, but must always make time always to read your wonderful creative soulful writes - I sincerely enjoy them - your opening and closing verses give this poem great appeal! So gracefully do you write about the soul, for without a soul there is no love and without love there is no heart - God is our path to everything, Our Omniscient Omnipotent God. Love your talented write as always my dear friend. Miss you - Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Besma Riabi Dziri December 9, 2019 at 9:56 AM Miss you too dear Jenny! I am deeply touched by your kindness and loving words soul sister.. indeed time is sometimes a foe.. denying us to relish moments in time with loving beautiful souls sharing the passion for poetry.. always a great pleasure to see you dear sweet friend despite time and distance.. love and hugs. Blessings.

Maria Williams November 19, 2019 at 4:45 AM I love the way you have formatted your poem dearest Besma. I was quite surprised to see that Vijay had actually described it the way I would have. Took the words out of my mouth. Lol. perfectly, 'opening and closing arguments serving ably as bookends to your superb message'. What I would like to add to that is your beautiful messages between are Encapsulated in Love. A truly loving Soul, pens beautiful poetry like this that captures the intensity of love. A lovely Gem for the fave list....Maria Hugs and xxxs Besma Riabi Dziri November 21, 2019 at 2:43 PM Wow, dearest Maria! I relish in such a wholehearted response.. I am so glad I connect with your profound soul and my feelings and thoughts reach and touch the depth of your beautiful soul.. grateful to you my sweet friend for your sincere words on my humble person and work.. blessed and happy always be.. Love and hugs.

Pashang Salehi November 17, 2019 at 11:41 PM The only thing that we need more of... is more love... beautiful... Besma Riabi Dziri November 21, 2019 at 2:14 PM Honoured and delighted by your graceful visit and genuine words, Pashang.. thank you so much.. Best regards and blessings.

Silent One November 16, 2019 at 5:36 PM I have seen your poetry develop so well.. Your vocabulary has improved and it shows in your poem...This flows so well.. you are a real word weaver now... A great achievement as English is probably your third language.. Besma Riabi Dziri November 17, 2019 at 4:58 AM Always a learner on every single path of Life.. trying to inhale from the wells of knowledge.. aspiring to attain levels of Beauty.. looking up to beautiful minds and generous souls that have a say and prove the reason for their existence.. blessed to walk a path of Poetry trodden by dear fellow poets and friends on PS and Honoured to learn from.. thank you so much, Silent One for so beautiful and elevating a feedback! An honour and a great delight. Regards

Robert Lindley November 16, 2019 at 4:42 PM What is Life If it has, sees, or feels no love? The Soul the Spirit, the Heart and the Mind all need its Lights, its Bounty and its Magnificent Gifts! Surely such are the sweetest Treasures that Life can offer. Your very fine poem gives that as its primary message to me and is truly a welcomed gift and a most inspiring one to receive.. A fav- a true and gleaming gem too. Besma Riabi Dziri November 17, 2019 at 4:41 AM Deeply humbled by the depth of your poetic and insightful response to my humble work, Robert.. with every single footfall on the path of Life we do rise in Love and Beauty.. thank you so much for adding a lot of depth into my humble work.. my honour and pleasure.. Regards and blessings.

Vijay Pandit November 16, 2019 at 2:37 PM I like the way your first stanza makes both the opening and closing arguments serving ably as bookend to your superb message: The mind rises in Love and the heart lets fall its tears The soul longs to reach what is above and the pain mends its fears. Superb poetry, Besma. Enjoyed the read and your message. Besma Riabi Dziri November 17, 2019 at 4:36 AM Always grateful to you dear Vijay for your sincere concern and great support to my humble poetry.. with such genuine encouragement and elevating feedback, my pen will be able to climb the ladder of Beauty.. thank you so much from the depth of my heart.. Best regards and blessings.