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Rising

~Rising~ 
(Haiku) 



Sun climbs high and bright
mountains greet majestic sky
the birds sing and    soar


Dorian Petersen Potter 
aka ladydp2000 
copyright@2015


September.11.2015

beautifulbirdmountainsnaturehaiku

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Bl Devnath

September 21, 2015 at 1:23 PM

So nice poem it's with nice pictures. Beautiful scenery you captured with beautiful words. 7 i feel. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl

Dorian Petersen Potter

September 23, 2015 at 2:51 PM

Thank you ever so kindly BL ,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.I appreciate your visit,your very kind comment, the 7 rating and all so much my friend.You're very nice.Wishing you a very lovely day!In his light God bless you!:) D.

Andrea Dietrich

September 12, 2015 at 3:04 PM

so pretty and to match the pretty pictures!

Dorian Petersen Potter

September 20, 2015 at 2:19 AM

Thank you so kindly Andrea,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.I appreciate your visit and your very kind comment very much.I'm so glad you liked the pretty pics too.Wishing you a very lovely day! In his light God bless you!:) D.

Kim Merryman

September 11, 2015 at 10:39 PM

A lovely haiku, Dorian! The pictures you posted with it are fantastic! Love, Kim

Dorian Petersen Potter

September 20, 2015 at 2:18 AM

Thank you so kindly Kim,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.I appreciate your visit and your very kind comment very much.I'm so glad you liked the pretty pics too.Wishing you a very lovely day! In his light God bless you!:) Love. D.

Jadazzle United

September 11, 2015 at 7:11 PM

delightful haiku Dorian:-) hugs jan xx 7

Dorian Petersen Potter

September 20, 2015 at 2:15 AM

Thank you so kindly Jan,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.I appreciate your visit very much and the 7 rating.Wishing you a very lovely week! In his light God bless you!:) Hugs! D.

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