Rising

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~Rising~ (Haiku) Sun climbs high and bright mountains greet majestic sky the birds sing and soar Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2015 September.11.2015

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Bl Devnath

Date: 9/21/2015 1:23:00 PM

So nice poem it's with nice pictures. Beautiful scenery you captured with beautiful words. 7 i feel. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 9/23/2015 2:51:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly BL ,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.I appreciate your visit,your very kind comment, the 7 rating and all so much my friend.You're very nice.Wishing you a very lovely day!In his light God bless you!:) D.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/12/2015 3:04:00 PM

so pretty and to match the pretty pictures!

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 9/20/2015 2:19:00 AM

Thank you so kindly Andrea,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.I appreciate your visit and your very kind comment very much.I'm so glad you liked the pretty pics too.Wishing you a very lovely day! In his light God bless you!:) D.

Kim Merryman

Date: 9/11/2015 10:39:00 PM

A lovely haiku, Dorian! The pictures you posted with it are fantastic! Love, Kim

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 9/20/2015 2:18:00 AM

Thank you so kindly Kim,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.I appreciate your visit and your very kind comment very much.I'm so glad you liked the pretty pics too.Wishing you a very lovely day! In his light God bless you!:) Love. D.

Jadazzle United

Date: 9/11/2015 7:11:00 PM

delightful haiku Dorian:-) hugs jan xx 7

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 9/20/2015 2:15:00 AM

Thank you so kindly Jan,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.I appreciate your visit very much and the 7 rating.Wishing you a very lovely week! In his light God bless you!:) Hugs! D.