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Rising

~Rising~ 
 (Haiku 3) 


 ~Sun rises high bright 

 mountains salute the sky 

 birds sing fly away~ 


Dorian Petersen Potter 
aka ladydp2000 
copyright@2015 


January,07,2015

birdmountainssunhaiku

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Poet Destroyer A

January 15, 2015 at 11:32 AM

breathtaking.... PD

Jan Allison

January 7, 2015 at 6:43 PM

stunning haiku:-) Hugs jan xx

Jack Ellison

January 7, 2015 at 5:40 PM

You've created this very sweet, peaceful mood with just the 3 lines of a Haiku! You know already I'm a big fan of yours, my dear ladylove! Love and hugs, Jack XX

M. L. Kiser

January 7, 2015 at 4:42 PM

An excellent Haiku!

Paul Callus

January 7, 2015 at 3:18 PM

A lovely haiku #7, Dorian. The splendor of sunrise is never lost on nature lovers. Well done. // paul

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

January 7, 2015 at 10:28 AM

Lovely haiku dear Dorian!

Dorian Petersen Potter

January 7, 2015 at 11:48 AM

Hello Dr Upma! Thank you so kindly for your very kind visit and comments. Much appreciate it all and you in every way thanks for the support. Wish you the best in 2015!Have a very lovely day! God bless you! :) Love Hugs! xoxox D."

David Meade

January 7, 2015 at 8:53 AM

Love this haiku -- the dance of nature. Outstanding., 7 fav

Dorian Petersen Potter

January 7, 2015 at 11:44 AM

Hi Dave! Thank you so much my very sweet and very dear friend. You always so sweet and kind God bless you. Much appreciate your friendship and all your very beautiful comments when you visit me thanks for the support. Wish you the best in 2015!Have a very lovely day! :) Love hugs and light! xxx D.

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