Rising

The rising sun constantly changes
The sky from glory to glory
The Son in our lives should change
Us from glory to glory

faithintrospectionlifefree verse

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Robert Davidson

November 18, 2009 at 7:00 AM

Wonderful words. Thank you so much for thenice comments on my poem. Robert

Gert W. Knop

November 17, 2009 at 1:38 PM

Yes, Sara, wished it would be so! Very nice poem. Keep your pen flowing! Gert

Anthony Nutter

November 17, 2009 at 10:39 AM

Nice write, short and sweet. Enjoyed the read. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit

Phyllis Babcock

November 17, 2009 at 10:39 AM

An excellent write Sara. God Bless Phyl

Daver Austin

November 17, 2009 at 8:14 AM

Nice work, Sara. I like the duality expressed here. Love, daver

Jared Pickett

November 17, 2009 at 6:08 AM

I believe I[Son] am my mothers glory..... my mother is my hero, my mentor.... A woman who struggled all through my youth to a wealthy artist who found her soul- mate later in life.. She is my idol... If I could build a statue to place in my front yard for the world to see I would, My idol.... She gave me the tools necessary to be a successful man, a genuine, honest man... That poem was to all mothers... I am sure Doris could say that about you... Wonderful poem Sara........:JP]