Rise With the Sun

Lay back and relax; watch this night unfold
I want to push you to your limits make you lose control
I won’t hold back a thing; I’ll give you all of me
And I will bring to life your wildest fantasies
Make it curve to my motion until you find the spot
Just keep going deeper, “Baby please don’t stop"
I want to fit you like a glove, hold you deep inside
Moving to your rhythm, from side to side.
There’s no need to be gentle give me all you got
And I will savor your flavor down to the last drop
Let me do things to you that have never been done
I will go down tonight, and  rise with the sun.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 4/28/2012 3:11:00 PM
You have me addicted to you poetry today lol. Lovely write. Hugs and more hugs Michael
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Date: 4/24/2012 3:47:00 PM
all the rest yes. but never never the things i never did before. great poem.
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Date: 4/21/2012 2:38:00 PM
nice piece dear
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Date: 4/21/2012 6:42:00 AM
Lovely written poem, like it alot my friend. - Have a lovely weekend i sunshine and love. - oxox Anne-Lise
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Date: 4/21/2012 3:51:00 AM
Smh!!! Speechless..this is a perfect write of going out to the movies!! "That is what you're talking about right?" O I mean making one..hmm..lol
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