Rise Up N Down

Moving towards high
In a transit  period of time
Moved up in the troposphere, mesosphere.

Like a pinnacle of earth
In the layers per layers
Like a feel good factor
But one thing you forget

You have a heart
Which is surrounded by social animal’s
You listen to your heart
Like a finger cross

You close your eyes
and you jumped down 
You thought you will reach
The surface of earth

But you fall down 
Further n reached the marina trenched.
and there were plants that binds your legs
You started shaking your whole body
To get away with that .

as you have lungs
You cannot survive In deep ocean
Luckily you streched your legs hard
And started swimming without knowing swimming
and you reach above n reach surface
Wow what a wonderful experience
Covered such a huge length
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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May 30, 2016 at 5:30 PM
Well done, Ravindra... LINDA
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