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Rise Up N Down

Moving towards high In a transit period of time Moved up in the troposphere, mesosphere. Like a pinnacle of earth In the layers per layers Like a feel good factor But one thing you forget You have a heart Which is surrounded by social animal’s You listen to your heart Like a finger cross You close your eyes and you jumped down You thought you will reach The surface of earth But you fall down Further n reached the marina trenched. and there were plants that binds your legs You started shaking your whole body To get away with that . as you have lungs You cannot survive In deep ocean Luckily you streched your legs hard And started swimming without knowing swimming and you reach above n reach surface Wow what a wonderful experience Covered such a huge length

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Date: 5/30/2016 5:30:00 PM
Well done, Ravindra... LINDA
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