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Rise To the Top In My Air Balloon

Our spirits lifted
Like cream we rise to the top
Clouds like Marsh mallows

Floating without wings
The wind becomes our compass
The birds envy me

Copyright © Sharon Ruebel | Year Posted 2010

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Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 1/14/2011 4:00:00 AM Congratulations Shar on your win in SKAT*'s contest "Air Balloon Ride". Love, Carol Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 1/10/2011 10:50:00 PM Congrats Sharon on your well deserved win in the contest of SKAT! Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 1/10/2011 5:44:00 PM Shar,, Congratulations in the contest. enjoyed,..p.d. Login to Reply

Michael J. Falotico Date: 1/10/2011 2:50:00 PM I love seeing our names in the same list... Congrats my dear poet friend... with love Michael Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 1/10/2011 11:35:00 AM (((( Bravo Sharon )))) delightful Haiku, love it. Many congratulations on your most deserved win....:) Login to Reply

Daniel Cwiak Date: 1/10/2011 10:12:00 AM Beautifully put, Sharon. Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 1/10/2011 8:23:00 AM Congratulations on your win with great work..Sara Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 1/10/2011 7:37:00 AM Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of Skat, Sharon Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/10/2011 7:14:00 AM YOu ending lines are so cute and clever for both these haiku. Congratulations, Sharon! Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 1/10/2011 3:01:00 AM Sharon this has got a dreamy feel to it! Congratulations on your win in Irma's contest, blessings WN Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 1/9/2011 11:41:00 PM Congrats Shar on your super success in Irma's hot air balloon contest with this magical ride luv.. enjoy your flight to the top of the chart tonight with luv..my friend.. Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 1/9/2011 10:08:00 PM SHAR, CONGRATULATIONS!! ON YOUE WONDERFUL HOT AIR-BALLOON RIDE. HAD LOTS OF FUN READING EVERY ENTRY. THANK YOU~SKAT Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/15/2010 9:02:00 PM This is one of the best entries I've seen in this contest.I sure hope you place. LUv, Andrea Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 12/9/2010 4:44:00 AM Beautiful haiku!And thanks a lot for your comment on my poem Lurking teardrops.-kashinath Login to Reply

Jancarl Campi Date: 12/7/2010 8:56:00 PM Thank-you for sharing your beautiful Haiku with us. And thanks for your comments on my poem. Have a blessed Christmas, Jancarl Login to Reply

Date: 12/7/2010 5:37:00 PM You have me smiling with this uplifting view. Thank you for sharing it with us and for your comment. Have a wonderful Christmas. Karen Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 12/7/2010 5:21:00 PM Great imagery, Sharon. I predict your double-haiku will "rise to the top" in the contest. Best wishes always, Carolyn Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 12/7/2010 6:48:00 AM Fluffy and lovely words .. a breath of refreshing poetry Shar and good luck in the contest.. certainly creative my friend... my entry is "Hot LUV Air Balloon"... my fav subject ..haha.. Login to Reply

Michael J. Falotico Date: 12/7/2010 6:39:00 AM Beautiful images and a warm write...love it Shar!!!! luv Michael Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 12/7/2010 3:09:00 AM Nice feelings of the Air balloon ride , Sharon Login to Reply

Susan Palli Date: 12/6/2010 10:36:00 PM sounds like fun! Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 12/6/2010 6:04:00 PM I love this awesome write,,, have fun in the contest,..p.d. Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 12/6/2010 3:42:00 PM It makes one wonder what the birds do think when they see these man made objects in their air space. Lovely Haiku Sharon, good luck in the contest >> James :) Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 12/6/2010 3:39:00 PM Creative, innovative and imaginative write, Good luck, Sharon Login to Reply