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Rise To the Top In My Air Balloon

Our spirits lifted
Like cream we rise to the top
Clouds like Marsh mallows

Floating without wings
The wind becomes our compass
The birds envy me

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Carol Sunshine Brown

January 14, 2011 at 4:00 AM

Congratulations Shar on your win in SKAT*'s contest "Air Balloon Ride". Love, Carol

Kash Poet

January 10, 2011 at 10:50 PM

Congrats Sharon on your well deserved win in the contest of SKAT!

Poet Destroyer A

January 10, 2011 at 5:44 PM

Shar,, Congratulations in the contest. enjoyed,..p.d.

Michael J. Falotico

January 10, 2011 at 2:50 PM

I love seeing our names in the same list... Congrats my dear poet friend... with love Michael

James Fraser

January 10, 2011 at 11:35 AM

(((( Bravo Sharon )))) delightful Haiku, love it. Many congratulations on your most deserved win....:)

Daniel Cwiak

January 10, 2011 at 10:12 AM

Beautifully put, Sharon. Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C

Sara Kendrick

January 10, 2011 at 8:23 AM

Congratulations on your win with great work..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

January 10, 2011 at 7:37 AM

Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of Skat, Sharon

Andrea Dietrich

January 10, 2011 at 7:14 AM

YOu ending lines are so cute and clever for both these haiku. Congratulations, Sharon!

Wilma Neels

January 10, 2011 at 3:01 AM

Sharon this has got a dreamy feel to it! Congratulations on your win in Irma's contest, blessings WN

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 9, 2011 at 11:41 PM

Congrats Shar on your super success in Irma's hot air balloon contest with this magical ride luv.. enjoy your flight to the top of the chart tonight with luv..my friend..

Skat A

January 9, 2011 at 10:08 PM

SHAR, CONGRATULATIONS!! ON YOUE WONDERFUL HOT AIR-BALLOON RIDE. HAD LOTS OF FUN READING EVERY ENTRY. THANK YOU~SKAT

Andrea Dietrich

December 15, 2010 at 9:02 PM

This is one of the best entries I've seen in this contest.I sure hope you place. LUv, Andrea

Kash Poet

December 9, 2010 at 4:44 AM

Beautiful haiku!And thanks a lot for your comment on my poem Lurking teardrops.-kashinath

Jancarl Campi

December 7, 2010 at 8:56 PM

Thank-you for sharing your beautiful Haiku with us. And thanks for your comments on my poem. Have a blessed Christmas, Jancarl

December 7, 2010 at 5:37 PM

You have me smiling with this uplifting view. Thank you for sharing it with us and for your comment. Have a wonderful Christmas. Karen

Carolyn Devonshire

December 7, 2010 at 5:21 PM

Great imagery, Sharon. I predict your double-haiku will "rise to the top" in the contest. Best wishes always, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

December 7, 2010 at 6:48 AM

Fluffy and lovely words .. a breath of refreshing poetry Shar and good luck in the contest.. certainly creative my friend... my entry is "Hot LUV Air Balloon"... my fav subject ..haha..

Michael J. Falotico

December 7, 2010 at 6:39 AM

Beautiful images and a warm write...love it Shar!!!! luv Michael

Dr.Ram Mehta

December 7, 2010 at 3:09 AM

Nice feelings of the Air balloon ride , Sharon

Susan Palli

December 6, 2010 at 10:36 PM

sounds like fun!

Poet Destroyer A

December 6, 2010 at 6:04 PM

I love this awesome write,,, have fun in the contest,..p.d.

James Fraser

December 6, 2010 at 3:42 PM

It makes one wonder what the birds do think when they see these man made objects in their air space. Lovely Haiku Sharon, good luck in the contest >> James :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

December 6, 2010 at 3:39 PM

Creative, innovative and imaginative write, Good luck, Sharon

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