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Rise To the Top In My Air Balloon

Our spirits lifted Like cream we rise to the top Clouds like Marsh mallows Floating without wings The wind becomes our compass The birds envy me

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/14/2011 4:00:00 AM

Congratulations Shar on your win in SKAT*'s contest "Air Balloon Ride". Love, Carol

Kash Poet

Date: 1/10/2011 10:50:00 PM

Congrats Sharon on your well deserved win in the contest of SKAT!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/10/2011 5:44:00 PM

Shar,, Congratulations in the contest. enjoyed,..p.d.

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 1/10/2011 2:50:00 PM

I love seeing our names in the same list... Congrats my dear poet friend... with love Michael

James Fraser

Date: 1/10/2011 11:35:00 AM

(((( Bravo Sharon )))) delightful Haiku, love it. Many congratulations on your most deserved win....:)

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 1/10/2011 10:12:00 AM

Beautifully put, Sharon. Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/10/2011 8:23:00 AM

Congratulations on your win with great work..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/10/2011 7:37:00 AM

Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of Skat, Sharon

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/10/2011 7:14:00 AM

YOu ending lines are so cute and clever for both these haiku. Congratulations, Sharon!

Wilma Neels

Date: 1/10/2011 3:01:00 AM

Sharon this has got a dreamy feel to it! Congratulations on your win in Irma's contest, blessings WN

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/9/2011 11:41:00 PM

Congrats Shar on your super success in Irma's hot air balloon contest with this magical ride luv.. enjoy your flight to the top of the chart tonight with luv..my friend..

Skat A

Date: 1/9/2011 10:08:00 PM

SHAR, CONGRATULATIONS!! ON YOUE WONDERFUL HOT AIR-BALLOON RIDE. HAD LOTS OF FUN READING EVERY ENTRY. THANK YOU~SKAT

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/15/2010 9:02:00 PM

This is one of the best entries I've seen in this contest.I sure hope you place. LUv, Andrea

Kash Poet

Date: 12/9/2010 4:44:00 AM

Beautiful haiku!And thanks a lot for your comment on my poem Lurking teardrops.-kashinath

Jancarl Campi

Date: 12/7/2010 8:56:00 PM

Thank-you for sharing your beautiful Haiku with us. And thanks for your comments on my poem. Have a blessed Christmas, Jancarl

Date: 12/7/2010 5:37:00 PM

You have me smiling with this uplifting view. Thank you for sharing it with us and for your comment. Have a wonderful Christmas. Karen

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/7/2010 5:21:00 PM

Great imagery, Sharon. I predict your double-haiku will "rise to the top" in the contest. Best wishes always, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/7/2010 6:48:00 AM

Fluffy and lovely words .. a breath of refreshing poetry Shar and good luck in the contest.. certainly creative my friend... my entry is "Hot LUV Air Balloon"... my fav subject ..haha..

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 12/7/2010 6:39:00 AM

Beautiful images and a warm write...love it Shar!!!! luv Michael

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/7/2010 3:09:00 AM

Nice feelings of the Air balloon ride , Sharon

Susan Palli

Date: 12/6/2010 10:36:00 PM

sounds like fun!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/6/2010 6:04:00 PM

I love this awesome write,,, have fun in the contest,..p.d.

James Fraser

Date: 12/6/2010 3:42:00 PM

It makes one wonder what the birds do think when they see these man made objects in their air space. Lovely Haiku Sharon, good luck in the contest >> James :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/6/2010 3:39:00 PM

Creative, innovative and imaginative write, Good luck, Sharon