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Rise To the Top

Being trapped inside your own mind can lead you to insanity. Soon before you know it, you’re a threat to all humanity. They’ll push you away when all you really need is help. Your life is no concern to them, no matter how much you yelp. So many selfish souls but some good still floats around, Search for that kind, they won’t let you down. Obtain what is essential to get back on your feet. When you do, that is one of the many times you and success can meet. Keep climbing that mountain, don’t ever look back or stop. The ignorant ones will try to drag you back down below, but the wise ones will succeed in getting you to the top.

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Skat A

Date: 8/17/2013 11:11:00 PM

CONGRATS on having your poem featured this week........ Love ~ SKAT ~

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/17/2013 10:26:00 PM

Hi Maricel, . Congratulations!!! It's nice to see your poem Featured on the soups Home Page, this past week :-) goodnight~ Luv* LINDA *

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 8/7/2013 9:53:00 AM

I enjoyed reading every word here...Thanks for sharing Maricel!!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/6/2013 7:03:00 AM

Hello new member: Maricel ! - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thank you for choosing to share your poems here with us. - I look forward to reading more in the future. - Have a good time and I wish you luck. - (Give and receive comments) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Skat A

Date: 8/5/2013 8:46:00 PM

Maricel, ,, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless..... Hugs* SKAT*

Anunda Ariga

Date: 8/5/2013 6:28:00 PM

really like it :) welcome to soup.... hope you like it here.. if you have time take a look at my poems, i think we can learn from each other. :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/5/2013 3:42:00 PM

being trapped in our minds, Maricel what a trip. love the ending -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@.....