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Rise To Roar

For many years, I have remained silent and sullen, and all in vain as abiding woes and spirit drained languish in loss, uncertain of gains. Addicted or destined... I've tried to abstain. Could I disappear, would demons be slain? I think I will stay and write them away - use this escape as my chance to play, overcome years of daunting displeasure, clean up the wreckage and unveil the treasure, release apprehension now tying me down, destroy, annihilate, smash to the ground every obstacle pulling me under! I rise and I roar; now, hear my thunder! 8/27/19 Eight Word Challenge Sponsored by Emile Pinet *minor edit 3/30/23

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Date: 7/29/2022 7:57:00 PM
Fantastic, bold and genius masterpiece!
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Date: 10/17/2022 11:47:00 AM
Thank you, Earnest : )
Date: 9/6/2019 7:11:00 AM
Nice to meet you as well. Do stop by for a visit.
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Date: 9/6/2019 6:24:00 PM
Looking forward to it ~ thank you :)
Date: 9/6/2019 12:27:00 AM
Well written :-) Good luck in the contest. I really like your poems!
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Date: 9/6/2019 6:25:00 PM
Thank you. I really like yours, too! Hopefully others catch on quickly ~ you rock <3
Date: 9/5/2019 9:25:00 AM
What a perfect first piece. Good luck in the contest. Also welcome to the soup. Blessings Rick.
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Date: 9/5/2019 10:40:00 AM
Thank you, Richard ~ Seemed like a fun idea to enter a contest, though I'm pretty rusty. Nice to meet you :)
Date: 8/30/2019 7:29:00 AM
I like this. Reads like a winner to me. Good luck.....80)....pat
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Date: 8/30/2019 11:45:00 AM
Wow, thank you, pat. That was unexpected ~ I thought it would be fun to try!
Date: 8/28/2019 7:25:00 AM
I really enjoyed this, I love the strength I feel in the words. Best wishes in the contest
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Date: 8/28/2019 10:53:00 AM
Thank you, Chris ~ I appreciate it
Date: 8/28/2019 3:58:00 AM
Excellent use of the 8 words, HT, and the definition of determination. Well done and good luck in the contest.
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Date: 8/28/2019 10:52:00 AM
Thank you very much, Phil ~

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