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Rise of Fall

Fall’s dust makes me sneeze Cool nights color maple trees Our team wins with ease Cuddling with you we squeeze Winter rumors in the breeze

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/20/2010 7:29:00 AM
What a cool use of monorhyme in your fall tanka, Robb! Great work -- enjoyed the images, each with a different perspective on fall. It's football season and I keep hoping our team will "win with ease." Go Seminoles! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/20/2010 7:28:00 AM
uplifting tanka, much enjoyed
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