Rise of Fall

Fall’s dust makes me sneeze
Cool nights color maple trees
Our team wins with ease
Cuddling with you we squeeze
Winter rumors in the breeze
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Devonshire Avatar
October 20, 2010 at 7:29 AM
What a cool use of monorhyme in your fall tanka, Robb! Great work -- enjoyed the images, each with a different perspective on fall. It's football season and I keep hoping our team will "win with ease." Go Seminoles! Love, Carolyn
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October 20, 2010 at 7:28 AM
uplifting tanka, much enjoyed
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