James Peranteau Poet Free verse

Rise My Fellows

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      Rise my fellow's
      insert the skies
        the sequoias
        the damsels
 the precious parts of
        your hearts

             Rise
        my fellow's
until the pens flow to
        emptiness
         and then
   purchase another

            Rise 
       my fellow's

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L'Nass Shango June 4, 2009 at 6:46 AM Jimmy, my boy, I am taking your words ... as things to emulate each time I obey. Bravo

Derrick Burton June 2, 2009 at 10:34 AM Great flow and lovely aproach, short and wonderful. Enjoy your day.

Christopher Higgins May 29, 2009 at 6:23 AM You have a way with words my friend.. your poetry always play a sweet song....

Charmaine Chircop May 28, 2009 at 1:13 PM poetry is forever,wonderful write my friend-charma

Carolyn Devonshire May 28, 2009 at 12:53 PM The pen's ink may run out, but your clever words continue! Love, Carolyn