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Rise Above the Struggles

In the depths of darkness, a soul does dwell, An 18-year-old girl, facing a battle so well, Battling her demons, depression's cruel embrace, Seeking peace in this chaotic place… Study pressure weighs heavy on weary shoulders, Dreams and ambitions feel like exploders!! But within this struggle, a fire starts to grow, Telling her to go with the flow.. Parents' expectations weigh heavy on the soul, But remember, dear one, you are in control.. Career confusion casts its daunting spell, Ambitions clash, creating a stormy swell, Yet within the confusion, passion ignites, A beacon of hope, shining so bright. Sometimes Overthinking comes in the brain, Just like storms comes in the rain… But within this storm, a fire burns bright… A spirit unyielding, ready to fight… With a smile on her face, she takes on the fight, Brightening the world with her infectious light… So let her be an inspiration to us all, To keep fighting, even when we feel small.. Rise above the struggles that try to define, Don't Overthink baby.. Coz u always shine.. Believe in yourself coz you hold the key, To unlock a future where you're truly free.

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Date: 10/24/2023 5:16:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts on struggles through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 10/23/2023 10:27:00 PM
Very well written. Enjoyed reading.
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Sneha Writes
Date: 10/24/2023 12:15:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 10/21/2023 2:00:00 PM
I hope you can overcome your struggles.. expressed so well..
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Sneha Writes
Date: 10/24/2023 12:17:00 AM
Thank you for your appreciation

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