Jean Omalley Polatnick Poet Rhyme

Rise

Each sway tips the wreckage
Still, it lies below
Barely feeling movement
Just the tug of ebb and flow

There you lie in waiting
Questions slip and slide
What's the use if it's all fleeting?
Why endure another tide?

Answers rise, with you in tow
Stirred from deep within your core
There's beauty in tomorrow
And there's hope upon the shore

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Emile Pinet February 9, 2015 at 7:20 PM This is a great poem of hope, I felt the emotions swimming throughout it. Emile. Jean Omalley Polatnick February 10, 2015 at 12:07 PM Thanks so much ... I really appreciate your thoughts!

Skat A January 24, 2015 at 7:49 AM Jean, love the ending thought. :) have a nice day ~SKAT~ Jean Omalley Polatnick February 3, 2015 at 3:35 PM Yes; as long as we have hope ... right!?! : )