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rise

condensations rise cold night air touches warm creek .... red, orange, gold leaves float
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Dietrich Avatar
November 7, 2025 at 2:01 PM
Lovely ku, Sara
Kendrick Avatar
November 7, 2025 at 2:02 PM
Why, thank you, Andrea. Your short review is encouraging. Sara K
Kerr Avatar
November 6, 2025 at 5:19 AM
Sara, A superb visual portrait has been painted by you. Strong autumnal leanings an added creative feature. Thanks for congratulating me on my success Howard,
Kendrick Avatar
November 6, 2025 at 12:30 PM
Your visit is appreciated, Howard. I kindly thank you for the time spent here, reading and commenting on my work. Sara K
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 5, 2025 at 5:36 PM
perfect fall imagery....such an appealing Haiku! hugs, Sara B
Kendrick Avatar
November 6, 2025 at 2:32 AM
Thank you, Sara B. I hope this is a good day for you. Sara K
Goldsmith Avatar
November 5, 2025 at 12:56 PM
I enjoyed reading your "rise" write. Few words with much said. Good Picture.... "Good Luck" If for a contest. Have a wonderful day writing away..............
Kendrick Avatar
November 5, 2025 at 1:34 PM
Not for a contest, Paula. Just some thoughts about the creek rise on this cold fall morning. Sara K
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