Risa Breathes

Lowered head with hidden eyes
     restless in her thin disguise
Unsure if looks from opossum play
     were welcomed or just echoed fray 
She faintly saw what others knew
     gifts of grace, insight pursued
She cried, she laughed, then cried again
     wondering where her wings might land
Rising hope through ashes made 
     from charred, crushed walls of desperate days 
Hold on! Let go! Hold on, but go!
     she climbed higher as strength arose
Looking up, then breathing in, 
     she exhaled peace, then breathed again
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
April 11, 2011 at 4:13 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Jamie. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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April 9, 2011 at 8:59 PM
really enjoy your poetry, this was a great one.
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